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Sound good, I would like to see this new fic
The writing is shit, grammar is bad so it hurts my head to read it. On top of all of this the story synopsis doesn’t give it a good introduction for the readers. TBH, if I had read a synopsis for this story the way it is I wouldn’t have bothered to read it. Sorry but you as a writer need help to improve and you also need a proofreader to help. I’m just kinda ranting so I’m not worried about grammar and such while writing this review
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For real? I enjoyed the novel greatly, it was something i enjoyed coming here for. Are you translating, and if you are can you give us the original site for the story? If its an original it would suck to lose your story
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FINISH IT! I greatly enjoy this book
Even before reading it it looks like an interesting idea. I’ve only seen one other story that has the same working multiverse idea where other animes intrude on the Mc world. I’l either update or change this review based on how this story is written. I would recommend to keep writing though. It has potential
I agree with frozen prince 110%
I feel like It would be cool if you made several short informative stories for the different worlds before some major crisis/Armageddon situation happens before joining the universes together. Just a thought. This is one of my favorite stories btw.
I think the planned worlds will be cool, while you are taking a break you should write out any ideas for your woRlds if you havent already done so and see if you can create any cool conflicts or sLice of life type situations that would be entertaining and humorous