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Axavia

Axavia

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Inquisitive and intelligent.

2019-07-24 JoinedUnited States
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    Elon Musk & the boys at Hacksmith Indistries have an answer for this problem. Get deeper roots, or grow at an angle towards the wind. If they could quite literally go to space, and create an actual lightsaber; Then some dude can grow plants a little bit better than other people.

    As the saying went, "An outstanding tree will definitely be blown down by the wind. If a tree is too tall, the winds will never allow it to survive."
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    Fey Evolution Merchant
    Eastern · Amber Button
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to GEN_SkeleSkin

    That’s a solid five football fields, three John Deer tractors, and fifty seven Arby’s sandwiches big! I reckon that’s a pretty small amount of memory, comparatively 🤔

    Genius let out a meow and said, "Yuan, I feel that I can memorize more things than before. If my memory was just a piece of red braised meat before, then my memory now is as big as 30 pieces of red braised meat!"
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    Fey Evolution Merchant
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Boobaslurper

    As an FYI, the writing tab of Webnovel doesn’t let the writer view any comments. The only way to view comments is through notifications, or by searching the book and adding it to the library; then scanning through the work. So the only way to fix any mistakes involves a rather tedious process of finding the spot on the book, switching to the writers tab, finding the correlating location in the writers tab, and making the correction. Then repeating that process, until all the corrections ahve been made. If someone is willing to put in the work to make corrections in the comments - grammatical or otherwise - I’m willing to transfer them into the written work. Writers often find it difficult to correct their own works. Not because they think the work is perfect; but because their mind automatically connects the dots of what they’re trying to convey, without properly reading the written work. Therefore, any outside perspective is appreciated!

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to

    Believe it or not, I’m actually not the type of person to be offended at others pointing out errors. I just genuinely don’t know where I ****ed up, and would appreciate the assistance!

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to BoeJiden

    It’s quite painless, as it’s instananeous. kinda like the lazer scenes from movies. If you ever hear a line under tension start humming, run; because the only way you’re gonna survive is behind a wall

    In addition, the ropes broke once and caused a serious accident. Iron Head still felt his heart was violently beating when he recalled it. According to the regulations, they were only allowed to pull four trams at a time. But on that day, the miners wanted to finish their work more quickly, so they linked six trams together. The tram was halfway there, when a half arm-thick rope suddenly broke, rebounded and hit a miner who was standing beside Iron Head. It broke his arm and several ribs. The trams slid down along the rails, knocked down two miners and crushed the legs of another unlucky miner.
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    Oh god, another system novel. Just what this website needed...

    [Used 3,500 contribution points in exchange for Reckless Bull Technique, a basic technique to execute power. It has been upgraded to Specialist Level.]
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    Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    Rainbow Fried Rice

    The Benefits Of Yangzhou Fried Rice
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    A rebounding rope ONLY broke some ribs? I work with ships, and when mooring lines snap, They do so with enough force to cut a man in half...

    In addition, the ropes broke once and caused a serious accident. Iron Head still felt his heart was violently beating when he recalled it. According to the regulations, they were only allowed to pull four trams at a time. But on that day, the miners wanted to finish their work more quickly, so they linked six trams together. The tram was halfway there, when a half arm-thick rope suddenly broke, rebounded and hit a miner who was standing beside Iron Head. It broke his arm and several ribs. The trams slid down along the rails, knocked down two miners and crushed the legs of another unlucky miner.
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    Its a writ of nobility. the tablet doesn’t cause the greed (as kit initially assumed); its the meaning behind the words which instills greed. If you had the chance at a Ducal title (with all the land and wealth included), would you not jump at the opportunity? People have killed for far less, Which is why kit’s parents warned her about such things.

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Boobaslurper

    Fix what? You kinda spammed that comment, so I don’t know what to fix!

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Boobaslurper

    If your first response to waking up in an alien world is to bang the nearest attractive person you can find, you’re a more confidant man than me!

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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Boobaslurper

    This story is told from a first person perspective, unless aneventu folds which requires an outside perspective. think of it like you’re reading a private journal

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Boobaslurper

    Horses are native to plains and steppes. he’s in an alpine mountainous biome, surrounded by primordial forest. The tribe is hunter gatherer, and haven’t even properly mastered agriculture yet; let alone animal taming. I suppose goat or deer is an option, if they somehow capture and tame them 🤔

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    She’s getting jealous that an alien who almost killed her (and could kill her easily at any point) is talking with another woman? I officially hate this woman. I thought she might be ok, but she’s a two dimensional waste of space with zero character depth or personality.

    just as Alice was about to get mad at Dax for trying to flirt with the receptionist she noticed that he had adopted the same business like smile and cold eyes as the receptionist, and therefore decided to stay quiet. the silence continued for about a minute, and Alice felt the room's temperature drop about 10 degrees as the receptionist and Dax continued to 'smile' at each other
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    Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    For a galactic warrior with several hundred years worth of battlefield experience... he seems like kind of a pushover. Like, he gives away promises and puts himself in debt way to easily, even if he is immortal.

    Ch 12 Preparations
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    Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Replied to Pro_Gamer_161

    Meme answer: He has the power of god AND anime on his side! Actual answer: Not really? He has photographic memory, he spent much of his youth assisting the engineers in an underwater city, and he spent a lot of time reading books. So in effect, he has access to every internet article and book he’s ever read, if he thinks about it hard enough. will that even really help him? doubtful. Asides from HTME & Guedelon, there aren’t many sources of info for how to make modern stuff using Bronze Age materials. And if I feel he’s progressing too quickly, I’m gonna find a way to F him over and set back his progress. Seriously, before the Kyölshüt debacle, he was on the verge of electricity and flight; despite not even having basic agriculture down! And that would’ve thrown the entire story progression out the window, as the entire paradigm would shift. Can’t have that, It would’ve made the story hella boring.

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    To quote Florence Ambrose, “Any technology, no matter how primitive, is magic to those who don’t understand it.” From the MC’s perspective: No, there is no such thing as magic. From the perspective of literally anyone else: OH MY GOD THAT DUDE’S A WIZARD!!!

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    A lesson in the Primordial
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    *extensive

    After the long and exhaustive and exhausting read about the basic info on the game, Dave felt thrilled.
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    Rise of The Undead Legion
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  • Axavia
    Axavia3yr
    Commented

    If the room was big enough, he could have just ran in a circle. It’s like training any mob, you just have to hope you’re fast enough & have enough room!

    'No way out of this.' Arnold thought.
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    The Rise Of A Porter
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