The God of Order and Balance. Wattpad: Saint Lord Royal Road: Blood Lord.
"There is no accidents"- Ogway or Oogway or something
The story is of great quality. There is some occasional blemishes but they don't really affect the experience and the story as a whole. As for the character design, I just find the MC can be empty headed when dealing with enemies. Given, the justification of his actions seems to be reasonable enough, but they could have turned out really bad, a contrast with the rest of his rational thinking. The world is good.
Hallo hallo? Anyone there? I am your author for this novel, and I hope everyone enjoys as much as it was tiring to make it.. Seriously though, thank you readers for reading my novel, I really appreciate it. Reminder to add it to your library too, it makes it easier and seeing that red notification for someone adding my novel to their library is greatly enjoyable. Also, mandatory 5 star review from author, mandatory according to article XVI of the great flying spaghetti
Oh I just noticed it today, You meant the hand made presents, not the amount of money that she has.
I will be making this review under the 5 chapters published. The story is developed well enough, but can be improved substantially. The grammar is good, but still can be improved. I suggest an increase in chapter published per week, but it is still too early to say something. In short, it is good, but plenty of room to improve.
Hallo dearest readers, I am your author. I will be doing my best to update at least a chapter a day, if I haven't, then I apologize in advance. Also, please do leave a review, and a comment, it really helps. Also remember to add it to your library for easy access. Have a good day readers.