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Trevor_Stover

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I have this crazy dream that one day I can have one of my works turned into a manga. I love writing and I enjoy feedback.

2019-07-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover1mth
    Replied to Drip

    Oh cool, okay, I'm going to check that out, at some point. Keep up the great chaps, I cant wait to read how much more chaos Moby causes馃憤. I need to get mine more noticed so I can get feedback, so thanks for the name of site!

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover1mth
    Commented

    Hey Drip, my friend, great chapter, just one question(Unrelated to chapter, couldnt have gone better) how did you get or make your Novel Cover? Need to get mine fixed to look more appealing

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover1mth
    Posted

    Dont update often, so that's the reason for a lower review from this Shameless Author. I simply wish to give my regards to my readers, I know I have many novels that aren't updated often or at all, but please support this Novel. It's my first idea from my early days. It sounds and reads like many that are on here, but I promise it's not influenced heavily by those said novels. I like criticisms, negative or positive, and would love it if you all would give me some. I'm not here for Contracts, I'm only here to publish a fully free novel to read to pass time, both for you and me in this dull time. Thank you for the consideration and support this shameless author in his quests!

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover1mth
    Replied to Drip

    NP, and hey, thanks馃榿. Literally only book I really read now. Gives me great perspective on how I should twist my Demon Pawn Characters. Keep up the great work!

    Ch 113 Dead On The Inside (2) [R-18, Rape]
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover1mth
    Replied to Drip

    Though I agree, as a writer, I too find it hard to just 'Gloss over or Shorten' such expansive scenes. What you also must realize is as a contracted writer such as my good friend and fellow artist of words Drip here, mate has deadlines and quotas to reach. So my sympathies go out to You Drip, I know writing can be full of difficulties. My novel is hilariously the polar opposite of yours

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Commented

    I've never shipped anything more in my Life!

    I'll leave the rest to your imagination, but let's just say that it was...an eventful night, I barely got a wink of sleep till hours later....I'm pretty sure it was close to dawn by the time we finally conked out.
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Replied to badah

    Ah, later on in the book it will be explained in further detail, but, at the time, no, the demons were not smart enough to fly or swim from Redeal as they were mostly simple minded demons

    The names and histories of these continents are as such; Redeal, also known as the old land, is a ruined continent. Believed to still be overrun by demons and monsters. Redeal is seen as the birth place of humanity. Garnem was the greatest of all cities, given the nickname The Great City.聽 It is from here, scholars speculate, where man started and spanned out. Then, two thousand years ago, the Great Demon War swallowed the continent of Redeal, and mankind abandoned it. Surrounded by ocean, the demons on that land could never escape beyond.
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
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    Can you elaborate so I can better answer the question dear reader?

    The names and histories of these continents are as such; Redeal, also known as the old land, is a ruined continent. Believed to still be overrun by demons and monsters. Redeal is seen as the birth place of humanity. Garnem was the greatest of all cities, given the nickname The Great City.聽 It is from here, scholars speculate, where man started and spanned out. Then, two thousand years ago, the Great Demon War swallowed the continent of Redeal, and mankind abandoned it. Surrounded by ocean, the demons on that land could never escape beyond.
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Posted

    Obligatory Review here, and honest or modest if you will. Yo be honest, this story was created with way too much Anime/Manga influence. But, as I continued to write it, the more I came to appreciate it. It's sometimes hard to keep the story on a easy to read pace without crossing into either too fast, or too slow in the story development. It has surprised me how many people do read and enjoy it, so I am thankful on that prospect, though I would really appreciate more reviews and collections of course! It would also be awesome to get feedback or even suggestions on how to improve the story. I'm always open to ideas. I'm not looking for votes or anything like that, though it would be appreciated, I only want to share my thoughts and ideas with the world. So thank you all for reading, and I hope you all enjoy the story!

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Replied to Trevor_Stover

    Of course mate, I know more than most what it means to be an author, to have your works viewed, and to have outstanding positive reviews! When I see good work, I support 100%! Hopefully soon I can reach where you are with mine! Good luck, keep writing, and I'll be giving my power stones for your future on this story!

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    Hero System! Transported to Another World
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Posted

    Dont let me down my dude! This book has serious potential, and I really look forward to reading more! From Author to Author, Bang up job mate! Definitely on par with My Vampire System in terms of creativity and story development. Not too fast, not too slow, but that easy read in between. Five stars mate!

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Commented

    Finally, new moves! Love this development!

    The first thing Quinn was going to do was have a look at the new tutorial video he had unlocked after learning the vampire martial arts.
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Commented

    ooh, starting out with death, that's actually very clever.

    "Test subject number 24. The subject lasted for two minutes and forty-five seconds after the administration of Valkyrie. Time of death: 4.22 AM."
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Posted

    Good story, I like the main characters background. I feel there could be more development in his personality, but otherwise it flows together very well.

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Commented

    oh yeah, real nice lol

    "Oh pretty boy!" Cia shouted. "If you and Layla aren't an item, then feel free to pop a visit in my room anytime." She said, winking at him as she closed the door.
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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Posted

    Fantastic Story! Love the development so far! This story is literally the only story I've put money into being able to read. Its a very addicting read.

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  • Trevor_Stover
    Trevor_Stover3mth
    Commented

    She seems nice....

    "Are you her boyfriend?" Cia said as she scanned Vorden's body from head to toe. "I'm guessing you two had an argument or something, judging how she's been since yesterday. Or maybe, it was the fact that she found out her best friends were terrorists, but she's not here."
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