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Dhaval_chandra13dCommentedbro the description is always so vague like unnecessary description which doesn't help in imagination at all.
The walls seemed to curve seamlessly, creating an illusion of boundless space. Elegant arches adorned the ceiling, stretching gracefully overhead and meeting at the center in an intricate design.- Dhaval_chandra1mthPosted
This is just like a rough draft there's no world building like we don't even know whether the mc looks like a Chinese,Muslim,Indian or European Their main family recidence was described as "lots of greenery" and "bigger than their home" zero fun except when he face slaps young masters.You will only read this if u have read all the others and you don't have anything to do.This authors story is good but doesn't know how to express himself which makes the novel value plum down tremendously.The system used by normal people is copy of the novel with sunless.If u involve world building in your novel you will be one of the greatest.(like the novel with sunless in it i don't remebmber the name)
- Dhaval_chandra1mthCommented
bro is this novel a copy of shadow slave? asking fr.
The moment a child reached thirteen years old, there was a chance that they would be teleported to the world of Solterra with or without their consent. - Dhaval_chandra2mthCommented
like normal ants can't see in the dark?
Lumerian Ants are a unique species found in hidden and dark caves. They stand out for their vibrant colors and bright patterns, with jaws that emit a soft light in the dark, allowing them to navigate easily in the depths of caves and during the night. - Dhaval_chandra2mthCommented
This guy😂😂😂
'The Heaven's Will's curse must be conspiring against us,' complained Alm after spending most of the Qi they had stolen from the girl on the formation. - Dhaval_chandra2mthCommented
Is this a Bible reference ?😂😂😂😂
"Some of the young women here seem promising... they're not pregnant, but we can influence them to... you know," Bruno spoke. - Dhaval_chandra3mthCommented
umhmmmm them*
The third person seemed a bit weird. Just to be careful, Nick refused them. - Dhaval_chandra3mthCommented
that's pretty cheap considering how a healing bath costs 5000 credits
Albert just laughed. "Nick, do you have any idea how expensive such a big house is outside the Dregs? If you want to buy the warehouse, you probably need more than 300,000 credits." - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
wow unedutcated people can do maths too
'If only five percent of my dantian is filled then, it means that I can store nearly 2000 wisps of spirit qi.' Lin Mu thought. - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
he has a 100 kg boar why would he keep intestine
While the blood drained from the boar, he cut off the head of the hook winged swan and let its blood drain as well. After its blood was drained, he slit the belly and removed all the guts, keeping the heart and liver behind. He then washed and stored the carcass into the ring. He did the same for the Red-snouted boar too, except that he only threw away the stomach and intestines; keeping the large organs. - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
clothes cost almost equal to a meat bun
Lin Mu picked two different sets of black clothes, a grey set of clothes, and one flawless white robe that he particularly liked. He then paid the clerk 10 silver coins for the clothes before putting them in the sack. Lin Mu had now spent more than half of the coins he got from selling the Snow veiled hare and was left with 30 silver coins. - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
it was 12pm before since then 8 hrs have passed and considering its medieval kind of setting(hell even in metro cities) who announces result at 10-11pm??
"Someone'll tell you how the test went in a couple of hours. But man, to think you killed more than ten people on your first mission without batting an eye. Not to mention another cultivator…" - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
what?
As the horse-faced bandit reached the corner, Liam's ring and index finger greeted his eye sockets. - Dhaval_chandra4mthReplied to MogeIman
uncultured 😠
'Through 'Ora', the miraculous world essence that gives any worthy being the chance to harness its groundbreaking strength. 'Ora' is all around us. In the air, in the ground, in everything.' - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
bro why all tropes are always same as a veteran reader I can somewhat guess the end of the story with these sentence😠😠😠
Never did he do so in reality, but during his dreams, it was as though all his hardship and coldness melted away. - Dhaval_chandra4mthCommented
just like some people like pringles original and some like cream and onion.
As Potty stubbornly and begrudgingly pulled Lenny along, they passed many rooms like these. Some were slaughter rooms for dissecting farm-raised meat, specifically human meat. Others were designated spaces for nursing human mothers and raising fresh farm animals. There were also areas where humans mated with each other, giving birth to purebred humans, satisfying the demons' preference for the original flavor of humanity. The last room Lenny saw was where demons mated with particular human and half-born women, resulting in the birth of children bearing the taint of demonic blood. - Dhaval_chandra6mthCommented
i read it as motor boat(brrrrrrr)
(You learned the skill of Body Motor Skills.) - Dhaval_chandra6mthReplied to umm_yes_a_name
they are his family bruh
Since Silas didn't know their names, he chose to number them instead. Numbering people was almost always easier than actually remembering or asking for their names. For example, to Silas, Erin was background character number 5. - Dhaval_chandra6mthReplied to Edite_
he even has an elder sister who 4 years older.....
'Girl? Have some shame, woman! You're 40!' Silas inwardly snarled, yet he didn't dare say those words out loud. - Dhaval_chandra7mthCommented
can't he just try next year
('Still... I'd stick to the orphanage if given a choice.') He smiled warmly as he thought about his family in the orphanage. The pain of being separated from them was not something he wanted to voluntarily put himself through.