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This is a great read. I read it overall very high. The only thing that makes me wonder and think is how it’s going to develop into a bigger world or cosmos. I’m over 2000 chapters and we haven’t seen anything that would make the world bigger. The story is very grounded on a giant Jupiter size planet.
I stay up until 2 AM in the morning sometime and I always check if there’s an update. By that time I can’t distinguished good from bad I just have been noticing a lot of talking for sure. Something I would like for you to also think about is when you write Reu being excited internally, it kind of takes away. The idea that he doesn’t have any excitement or emotion outwardly. Please do not take any offense. I am writing this at 1:48 AM. And people only comment when they really care like if no one cared, who’s gonna spend 1500 coins and comment.
Because Kane is talking, this sounds like he’s talking about his grandmother.
I think the question now is is the underworld in harmony. Or is it a part of the harmony? Because in my mind, even if they are good at hiding in the shadows, the king of Harmony would’ve gotten rid of them if they weren’t necessary. Hopefully they don’t do anything too dumb like try and abduct or kill any of the clan members.
Thanks for the clarification. I’ll just have wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
I honestly don’t understand why this is just so out of character. He never underestimated what the royal family was capable of. Why would he start now, and with the most powerful of them all.