NatMarie
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I love your stories! If you ever need a proofreader…
I’m sorry. I love your book. If you don’t want me to point out words just let me know. Frequented not frequently. Unless it’s meant to say “went frequently”
Words not friends?
This chapter and these last two paragraphs especially are awesome!!
He TRUSTED her. Not he THRUSTED her. Just an FYI. Still loving the story!❤️
I’m assuming “toilet” is meaning the bathroom? Sorry just had a weird mental image of her scooping a bowl from the actual toilet bowl. Loving the story!