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So far, it's an enjoyable read. However, I believe there is an imbalance between narration, monologue, and dialogue. Readers are only given information from the 'narrator' in each chapter. The dialogue is sparse, while the monologues are almost non-existent. While narration is vital for describing a character's actions; dialogue and monologue are equally important for depicting interaction between characters as well as a character's reasoning, thinking, and motive. I'm hoping to see progress in the following chapters.