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An effect of spirituality stemming from Klein's connection to sefirah castle. Just like how normal people can do divination and it isn't limited to seers
Amon with deception hmmmmm
He can’t using only his own abilities because simple paranoia isn’t a strong enough ‘connection’ for the error authority to work off but if he has some abyss pathway characteristics then the mc is f’d regardless amon can detect errors in fate so the mc’s tampering will not go unnoticed for long.
Or at least knowing that the scale ends at 300 if you do
IQ scale ends at 300 FYI
how did he steal that from Amon? Because if I remember right he couldn't affect seq 0 / uniqueness
Okay as I don't feel like posting an actual review about this, I'm going to post the one big problem I've found while reading your novel here. The novel reads more like a script for a screenplay with the 'Fate entered ...' 'Fate did this' etc.. Try to show what is happening instead of simply telling the readers. For example: "The knight stabbed him in the chest. 'aaaarg,' he screamed as he looked at the knight with fury in his eyes and said. 'I'll kill you!'" versus "He felt the cold metal lodged in his chest and let out a pained scream, with fury in his eyes he growled. 'I'll kill you!'"
What is this gif from?