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P_Young_4470

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  • P_Young_4470
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    OH MY GOD BRO THIS IS SO BAD WITH THE COLORS so far he doesn't even sound human but demonic

    Moreover, Alex's penis was fierce, not only long and strong, but the veins seemed to be entwined like a green dragon.
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    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
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    bro color period seems a little unnecessary 🙄 😑

    A thick black penis instantly popped out from the crotch, fiercely striking Li Wan Ning's delicate cheek.
    altalt
    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    true fact : you can breathe survival ,you can eat,sleep,and even screw survival in a apocalypse but you can't do any of those things with dignity (not alone at least it will always require survival first)

    But today, she was forced to choose between survival and dignity.
    altalt
    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
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    But make her his slave!
    altalt
    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
    P_Young_44702mth
    Commented

    if it's only twice as much it's not really worth it

    Hopefully, this means more attribute points and Apocalypse Coins when the burial is complete.
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    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    man this is getting super boring and repetitive

    A sudden noise startled the elderly person, freezing them in their tracks. The door had unexpectedly closed again?
    altalt
    Apocalypse - Zombie Evolution System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    dudes way of writing and references are weird it's hard to read

    His convulsions grew more violent, as if he was performing a full spin on a Thomas the Tank Engine, knocking over the surrounding chairs.
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    Apocalypse - Zombie Evolution System
    Sci-fi ¡ AllenWorker
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  • P_Young_4470
    P_Young_44702mth
    Commented

    why is he speaking of the goddess like that it's stupid

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 Lies boys tell to get laid(Bonus chapter)
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Community Service (+18)
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    She saw how Selena was when Ethan was ass fucking her and knew it was better, she had never heard of it but it just happened in front of her and she wouldn't be able to get it out of her head till she was also fucked in the ass.
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    at this point I'd like to say I'd love to read a story where the author doesn't shy away from getting girls pregnant maybe even addicted to getting girls pregnant I was just thinking that as I was thinking that I'd be nice if when one of these Mc that keep getting the ability to control whether they impregnate someone or not always seems to use that ability to NOT get girls pregnant 99% of the time but what if they just hit that switch to on and just went around screwing and loading up everybody then he later he runs around visiting the kids and when they get a little older he comes by and sets them up for development and training then later he takes the best most promising ones to his side maybe even makes an elite blood guard where you have to be of his blood to even enter (just spit balling)

    Her mouth was open and her tongue was out, she moaned loudly as she convulsed and her pussy began leaking love juices but Ethan didn't stop as he was also close, he continued for some seconds before shooting his seeds inside her pussy.
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    I got the perfect line to use in this book :Because I am a Man not just a male. P E R F E C T for this novel

    Ch 66 Chapter 66 Princess
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    sounds like she just got trumped lol

    Ethan removed the finger and his finger was already wet so he knew Lara was extremely horny, he thrust in again this time with two fingers making her moan even louder than the first time and the door to Cynthia's room opened.
    altalt
    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    "Mmhmm..." Ethan grunted as her meat wall squeezed his dick restricting any movement while the girl was on the bed, her hands spread apart and her face on the bed, she was neither moaning nor screaming, but she could feel something up her ass.
    altalt
    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    wow...wow... wow ECHO...ECho...echo...echo

    Ch 19 Chapter 19 Threesome (+18)
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    I wanna go out on a limb here and explain that all guys do not like just one of there balls sucked on hard because it starts to hurt especially when they suck and pull and having one girl per ball can make it hurt worse when the sucking and pulling doubles and starts to go separate ways but it ironically is mentally satisfying at the same time as painful

    "Aaargh" another grunt leaked out from Ethan's mouth as Alisha who was staring at them suddenly engulf one of his balls and started sucking on it.
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Ch 18 Chapter 18 Threesome (+18)
    altalt
    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    OMG ain't got enough going on you got to add the busted system troupe

    (So check your points, and before that, there is something wrong with the system)
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
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    Commented

    I see potential but it does feel unsatisfying so far you needed a good hook at the start of your story and this would have made a good one and the way he acts like he's afraid of the cat is just disappointing

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 Level up
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy ¡ Crimson_Blue
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  • P_Young_4470
    P_Young_44702mth
    Commented

    it's a little much to be honest

    Ch 90 Violent Awakening
    altalt
    Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
    Eastern ¡ Nate_Quinn
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