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Connor_Stokes14dCommentedIMO you could just rush toward cannon if that would help the story flow and then do Flash back chapters to “ancient history” to explain the background. It worked decently for Magical Marvel (HP X Marvel) and would possibly let you write what will likely be easier and have more time to work on the harder completely original plot. Either way I have enjoyed the story so far and will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks.
Ch 13 This gonna be on hold- Connor_Stokes1mthCommented
I’d assume watered down OP at the moment, but gradually change to massively OP as he gets used to his new power and knowledge. I think it might be interesting if he is arrogant and gets humbled a lttle do to overconfidence in his new self without really training himself.
Ch 30 Ireland Wins - Connor_Stokes1mthReplied to Quin_BlandCh 27 Temporary Hiatus
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Dropping this story at chapter 13. The grammar is bad. Wrong choice of words, pronoun confusion and the sentences are choppy and difficult to follow. I think this has the potential to be a good story with some extreme editing to correct the errors and make it flow. As it currently reads, it’s not worth my time.
- Connor_Stokes3mthCommented
It should be patience not patient.
"I mean really, is it that hard to get through your skulls that i'm stronger than you, I told you I'm much older then all of you combined, and yet you still test my patients, by testing me and my patients, hoping I would die so you could take my members from me." I said, standing only a few feet from them now. - Connor_Stokes5mthCommented
Nope it’s definitely square. It can hold 10 m^2 of designs. Lol.
"Storage space▪10msq - Connor_Stokes6mthCommented
Mc’s dad is the one who almost gote killed by a werewolf from a prank. Snape would hate the MC just as much.
Except for Harry, Snape would not bother with anyone for the time being. - Connor_Stokes6mthCommented
1200 students would be 172 students per year.
You have to know that unlike in the past, Hogwarts now houses about twelve hundred students each year. That's thirty-five students in each year, being seven years from entrance to graduation in five houses. - Connor_Stokes8mthCommented
I thought the jinchuriki was Kushina at this point in cannon.
Nawaki was different from Kurama's Jinchuriki, Hinata. Many people kept a close eye on Hinata because of her status, and trouble could arise at any time, not to mention the potential issues caused by Kurama itself. - Connor_Stokes9mthCommented
Unless I am mistaken the sorcerers stone is no longer in the castle. This is the plot of the second book now no longer the first.
It honestly didn't matter in the end since Nick had already deduced that the stone in the castle was likely a fake. The reason he thought so was due to both how easily it was destroyed as well as the fact that the Flammels were said to die after this year. A fun little fact about the famous alchemist was that he had faked his own death no less than seven times in his long life before resurfacing a few decades later.- - Connor_Stokes1yrCommented
You do you. We appreciate the stories you right and while we would probably prefer to see this one through to the end, it is up to you. You don’t owe us anything. Good luck whichever way you choose.
This book has been deleted. - Connor_Stokes1yrCommented
I think that just naming it simply would be good. I personally like the name, “Infinity”. Because it ties into the idea that the only limit on magic is the imagination. So I vote for the club name to be Infinity or something along those lines. Infinity, Ouroboros, or such.
Ch 41 Imagination - Connor_Stokes1yrCommentedCh 197 Ch. 196 Riddles