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Hussein_Abbas

Hussein_Abbas

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2019-07-15 JoinedIraq
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  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas2yr
    Replied to BackFist

    What's GOH

    Ch 9 Desires
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    Invincible Me
    Anime & Comics · Reidrain
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  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas2yr
    Commented

    I can't click the link

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    Invincible Me
    Anime & Comics · Reidrain
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  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas3yr
    Replied to Timis

    How do you know? Did she post something

    Ch 17 Battle Against the Fire Demons
    altalt
    The Goddess of Death
    Movies · CDR_Grae
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  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas3yr
    Commented

    Is this dropped?

    Ch 17 Battle Against the Fire Demons
    altalt
    The Goddess of Death
    Movies · CDR_Grae
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  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas3yr
    Commented

    I'm dying for a new chapter

    Ch 17 Battle Against the Fire Demons
    altalt
    The Goddess of Death
    Movies · CDR_Grae
    detail
  • Hussein_Abbas
    Hussein_Abbas3yr
    Commented

    I love this story but it for a while it is like reading someone's journal than actully reading a story it's not like I don't like his experiments and spell crafting but now the interactions between characters became rare and when it does it's not satisfying I loved when alex and his friend went to the forest to free the vampire I their interactions but the dialouges are rare like it mostly monoluges and when there is does happen it's like short and unevantful this chapter had the most interactions on a long time and I really liked it you could change pov to his uncle show his dealing or his friends or you could show his sisters at home expand your world because a story is more than just the mc cooped up studing it's becoming just like those cultivation novelsand now is the most crucial because we already know what happens in the books that's my honest opinion I love your story but you have fallen into tell not show mistake many writers fall into. But still I'm exicted for the next chapter

    Ch 93 Rita Skeeter
    altalt
    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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