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Sandman7830dCommentedIt was a good ending but I didn't see anything about his younger sister how she ended up you mentioned Alex's side but not his own.
AN: I hope this was a decent ending. I hope everyone enjoyed it and I'm thankful for all the support everyone showed me along the way. I hope to see you all in my next Fan Fic, I will try to post an updated chapter here once I make it. Either way, I hope you all have a good day.- Sandman786mthCommented
then once they reach maturity they then kick them out on the street like the street rats that are.
America's Ministry Of Magic had passed a bill that would allow to the ministry to erase the memories of their children from non-magical parents' minds. It was a cruel practice, but American magical community made it up to the children who were taken away from their parents by treating their first-generation magicals (Muggleborns) with the best care and provided them with free education and home until they reached majority. - Sandman787mthCommented
Did this scene happen like this because he has good luck now after the second gacha. or are you not following the luck plot that you had before. If you are still following the luck plot line I like how you did it.
"WHAT?! NO FOOTAGE!?" The private investigator was flabbergasted when he heard it. - Sandman7811mthCommented
I love the names of the town and island.
Cherry met up with Borke when the time came to go down to the town. Pebbleton was where most of Boulder Island's residents lived, with the rest living in small farming or fishing villages. - Sandman781yrCommented
How do they not know that he is at Hogwarts? Every student knows he is there. I am sure they told their parents in a letter, especially the slytherins that want to build connections. Do they block the news in all the letters? The ministry knows about him. So his parents should know as well. They are only under surveillance not containment.
"What should we do about his family, Albus?" She asked. - Sandman781yrReplied to Skaviouz
"hatchling" I think is better for a Ravenclaw myself.
"Oh, nothing, little snakelet." She reassures. - Sandman781yrCommented"Don't cry, you are safe since I'm here" said the figure in a warm voice. This was none other than Alex.
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Shino was a finalist. He didn't fide anyone because kankuro forfeited his match.
If he remembered correctly, the original finalists were: - Sandman781yrCommented
Everything but stupidity is curable.
[Host is suffering from hypothermia, ghost type erosion, negative energy erosion, and stupidity] - Sandman781yrCommented
Said the man that enslaved the goblin race to the orc race.
Moku daydreams of his old world that often fought and enslaved each other only because of skin color. - Sandman781yrCommented
I love the way you are showing that the MC isn't perfect. It is quite funny to me. It stands out from other stories.
I threw my body away even before opening my eyes. I cradled my head, expecting my ears to ring, an explosion, and the familiar sensation of wood digging into my flesh. The snow was cold, and as I hesitantly raised my head, I witnessed a miracle. - Sandman781yrReplied to noble_anime
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Still, I was going to learn how to counter spells. I was going to learn how to do so many things that by the time I was done, I'd challenge anyone to turn my cauldron into muck or let books fly off my grasp. I was going to become the very best, like no wizard ever was. If Tom Riddle could make Horcruxes at his fourth year of Hogwarts, or perhaps was it the Sixth, then I could damn well make incredible progress by the end of the first year. - Sandman781yrCommented
This chapter was stupid to me. I understand you wanting to build the relationship with them, but you don't need to lower the women's IQ to do that. Where did those thin clothes come from. I can look past that, they are in a town now maybe from shopping. We know that they weren't down the mountain because they only have what the shop gave them for survival. She knew what environment she was go to. She just survived almost freezing to death a few day before. You are really sensitive to the cold for a long time after that. So what I am trying to say is that even if she had those clothes with her there is no way she would were them while walking threw town to go eat. Yes in a warm house or hotel or wherever they are staying she could were them. But she would definitely but on warmer clothes if she went out. So please don't put stupid this in the story. I like your story so far. I am commenting to maybe help with he quality of the story improve.
Ch 42 Sister's WarmthdetailAre You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?Urban · Remove the Head and Eat - Sandman781yrCommented
is a system an unorthodox means?
"I don't think so either. The professional knowledge that Bell has doesn't seem to be learned through unorthodox means."detailAre You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?Urban · Remove the Head and Eat - Sandman781yrCommentedThe moment this happened, the bookshelves near me began to tremble, and a mountain of Mangas, Light Novels, and even Eroge fell over me and crushed my body. I really told my mother that I wanted to have that Japanese trip. She was so tired throughout the whole flight, and now here we go, I die… Feeble? Well, yes, I am a feeble little woman. I never had the genes of my sister… she's a giant gorilla…
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I like these transmigration novels and think about what I would do if it happens to me. I know could remember the main plot if I could keep my memories but I know I would forget the names of the bijuu by the time I would be able to meet one. I would be like I know you guys have name but I have forgot them and now I don't have internet to look them up before talking to them.
Isobu shook his massive head, "It's been a long time since I spoke with a human that did not consider me a monster," the giant turle mused, almost nostalgically, before looking Daiki in the eye, "Very well, what you speak of, is far too private knowledge for you to have just come across it, especially with how easily you speak our names. I'll lend you my aid, now tell me human, you know my name, but what is yours?" - Sandman781yrReplied to 0_0e
It said that he traveled back in time 3 months before doomsday. It just now said how long he survived before reincarnating.
Before he was reborn, the first day after the apocalypse, he was crushed to death by a sudden building collapse. - Sandman781yrReplied to The_Grindelwald
This is a world that the Hokage will let the entire village show hatred to a little kid for something that is out his control. They didn't let him know who his parents were until he is old enough to portect him from his parents enimes. All this while he was a Hokage's son. This show a that they don't give two shots about anyone.
"Yami I will be going now. You take care of yourself" Kakashi said and body flickered away. - Sandman781yrCommented
Thank you for this note. Without this note I would be a little upset by that fact. Now Knowing that he is a trainee, it makes the story a little more believable.
(I know how did the Anbu not notice Yami isn't unconscious but just acting? He is a fucking trainee doing an internship. They make mistakes. Fucking deal with it and read ahead.) - Sandman781yrCommented
Congratulations you just died again.
After, a nurse held me out from a cave I start crying out. But not long that I can't cry anymore. Because a man supposed to be my father picked me up and spin me around like a toy.