You ever saw some kids misbehaving and wanted to just assist but you're too old and you would be sent to jail.

Perfect, now the limitations as that would take up a lot of nen. it could be a mark like if he hits some a mark would appear randomly and if he hits the mark the nen protection that area would vanish or he can stab something and have it attack it like leorio hatus. Btw I am not sure if I would use it for the M.C but its a great Hatsu

Who said he was happy go lucky? Just stay for a few more chaps, it will start pick up now. I am trying to create personality for each of them so kinda hard figure out the right balance.

That's a great hastu, but instead of the telekinetic it could be like teleporting like if he would drop the daggers it would pass through the ground and appear over the person head or shoulders.

No hatsu as yet, but his nen skill will be explain in the exams. Hatsu I haven't decided as yet, but I do have some ideas.

Not trying to be rude or anything but why wouldn't people in hunter x hunter have friends, even Guts sorta have friends?

*Cough cough just was living up to hunter x hunter nickname, hiatus x hiatus. Jokes aside, I will start back on this fanfic to improve my writing as there is a lot of things to write about in this fanfic alone.

Yeah....inside joke (nah its just a typo)

only specialist can predict the future (i think)

okay,yes learning nen from Netero would be great but i doubt he would care about his own death and Eldred would have to lie saying that he is a specialist that knows the future or maybe he is a specialist that knows the future.🤯 Tbh trading info to learn nen from the great Netero is an awesome idea but Eldred has no plans of telling anyone of the future (willingly that is).

Thanks for the review this is my second fanfic and for the capital letter problem i'm pretry sure they are many more like that, i guess the main cause is because i'm using my phone to write and I know its a terrible excuse but i'll try to fix as many mistakes as i can. for the time skip training i personally hate them😅 (well just the whole just got to the hxh world better learn nen, its in every story) i rather to jump right into the story and slowly show the result of the training which would give the reader an idea without the whole explaining part... Tbh now i'm thinking its a terrible way to write fanfic like that (not the first time someone mention me skipping the training😬)

cover pic i don't know what to put and for the nen i am hinting at it a lot but nen won't come into play yet

The Man The Myth The Legend Scott sterling !!

it's automatic, the founders of Hogwarts (i think) created a magic quill that writes down magic children names when they are born and when they meet of age the school send the letter. i believe other magic school use the same system except for dumstrag

hmmm not a bad idea

yeah this is half of the story i got nervous and didn't write the rest, so i just followed the main plot and add only a few deatils meh if anyone wants i could try to rewrite and put everything in. sorry i replied so late

Thanks for reading.

Thanks for reading through it

I understand that staring with a random event is risky but I plan to use it to give him a reason for wanting to destroy the Abruzzi family and go into the time he first arrive. In a few more chaps that is suppose to happen and I hope you can read so far to tell me if it works or of it still need that prologue.

The prologue would be the same B.S as ever other fanfic and it would be boring (for me to write) Its just his early years and that can be put in as time goes on instead of just forcing everything in a few chaps.