Alukadance

This is a dumb ideas more than a smart one

Why does ever person know sign language. I understand why the royal family and monks and castle staff know it but this is getting outrageous. Why should a clothing store shop keeper know sign language?

He honestly feels way too communicative for how his character was portrayed. Animal speak I get. But I imagine in my head that he would be a man of few words to most humans.

GIGACHAD doing tic tok dances while someone is dying

My middle name is Valerian. It’ in honor of my grandfather who’s name is Valeriy. That got me baited to read this

We remember. Heavenly demons disciples moto

Quick criticism. Your writing has a lot of holes. I should not be getting some of this information from the comments. You also previously stated in the very first chapter that you forgot to add that th e souls fought for the body therefor the change in personality. I really don’t mind spelling mistakes here or there, but these plot holes are killing me. Also the synopsis is confusing. You stated that he reincarnated in earth but then without explaining anything stated that the mc was in another world different from earth without any “bridge”. In short, your writing is extremely jumpy and confusing. It’ confusing not because you cant write but because you leave out extremely vital information witch leaves holes.

The self confidence! I love it.

+ 1. imma complain a little. Can we open some of the male characters a little more. I would like to know more about them bc at this point this novel feels borderline harem. Most male characters besides the ones on Nits feel like them come and they go. NPC type characters. Rodney really pulling his weight in Milia 222 for all the men out there. Bc I felt like the milia 222 arc felt like a big beach episode in anime

You are a literal pepega for thinking that. Even in our world where we have no magic, statistics show that twins who have a healthy relationship and grew up together are incredibly efficient at working with eachother. Considering that the world they live in is a magical world, a mind link isent something incredible. And yes, there is a theory that a hive mind is far more capable of learning than a single mind. So shut the f up with your dumb ideas. You are literally reading probably one of the most cliche novels on this site and are mad at me for pointing out obviously dumb idea like telling others that you are not from this world.