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keldarr_02809dReplied to Ancientdatiost_014And so much more if she retains all 3 grails.
I want at least one healer in Mc's peerage, probably one worth two pawn pieces.- keldarr_02809dReplied to Canine_9_6438There were only a few days until Raven's 18th birthday. Trigon was going to see if he couldn't soften his daughter up before the events of that day went into motion. Yes, nothing could go wrong with two of his plans combined. It was perfect! After all, Trigon was nothing if not an optimist in the most twisted sense of the word…
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And then Trigon met Mr barkeep heh let’s see what adventures happen next!
There were only a few days until Raven's 18th birthday. Trigon was going to see if he couldn't soften his daughter up before the events of that day went into motion. Yes, nothing could go wrong with two of his plans combined. It was perfect! After all, Trigon was nothing if not an optimist in the most twisted sense of the word… - keldarr_028010dReplied to whitethief274
I’d be surprised if the author even listens.
Voldemort is no different. Sooner or later he will see the back slash of dark magic. - keldarr_028013dCommented
Ok well we the people demand double post then much hahaha
[AN: Sorry for the late chapter today. I forgot to post earlier :/] - keldarr_028014dCommented
Dude it is Slughorn.
Potion masters like Snape and Slug Greenhorn watched intently, they too wanted a sample to test, but seeing the limited potion bottle and the drastically reduced purchasing power of British pure-blood thanks of one greedy mother*cker. They kept quiet, not like they can do anything else. - keldarr_028016dCommented
Puddle
"Thank you, Harry, for taking me flying with you. It was so much fun...after I got over the initial fear of being a splash spot on the ground." she said, kissing his cheek and hugging him. - keldarr_028017dCommented
This isn’t much but just a pointer your grammer needs a bit of work.some words left out some sentences had improper punctuation. I say pointer because the way you wright seems that English isn’t your primary language
What are the things that need to change about this fic? - keldarr_028018dCommented
First mate is a much better way to say it
And one interesting thing to note is that neither of the two accepted the position of Vice-Captain, as they said it should be a position reserved for the future. - keldarr_028022dCommentedCh 9 Mission
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My dude what levels you have not a single level stated!
Although Nosepass level was 7 level higher, Evan decided to hold onto Milotic because of it's type advantage. - keldarr_028030dCommented
He’s god bro all he has to do is either look into the future or use an item to do it
Staying true to DxD I have decided to create a sacred gear that while filling in the function of a system, also reasonably fits within the DxD setting(And not giving it a name like gaming gear because god died before the first steam engine). Iter Melius is not some reality-bending omnipotent system neither is it a god killing Longinus. It is simply a more unique sacred gear. - keldarr_02801mthReplied to Zizinho21
Agreed
"Okay Students as you've heard our honorable student from special have accomplished a new achievements again which brought a huge sensation all over the world and he is graduating from our academy as of today let's congratulate,Evan Stone our honorable student which brought our academy a great achievements which no one could have ever accomplish " Everyone started applauding. - keldarr_02801mthCommented{Image Of Slowpoke}
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Also come on man the typing chart is long time standerd you a noob.
Even after grinding on 'Route 22' for so long, I wasn't even able to defeat the assistant of Brock, let alone Brock himself. - keldarr_02801mthCommented
Dummy the best all around starter for the beginning of the game is bulbasaur! Reguardless of favorite.
Even after grinding on 'Route 22' for so long, I wasn't even able to defeat the assistant of Brock, let alone Brock himself. - keldarr_02801mthCommented
ROFL went from standard Pokémon to a one piece peach I love it!
[Be brave and Keep pushing on. Become the champion and the world will be yours. Money, Fame, everything as long as you have the power.] - keldarr_02801mthCommented
Dude it’s moody not groom
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Um yo that’s not her name bro! Definitely not her name.
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In my opinion you were doing good till you started smashing so many together at most pick 3 anime to mash it is much more manageable to wright and merge you are suffering from to much content to merge without sacrificing your writing style with this do what you do and I’ll read it even if it sucks cause your style of writing is awesome!!
Ch 153 Craze: The new one pretty bland for my taste. It is very hard to write a good fanfic.