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Is Harvesters mentioned twice here for a reason?
ah yes the dense mana, the mana that's dense so dense you can see it with your two eyes, two eyes that can see dense mana, that dense mana that eyes can see
a gender neutral plural or possesive such as their would work better then using his/her multiple times.
feels strange. eldrian is one of the 100 or so counts in the kingdom. yet so much bs is happening
he called her cousin when he said "Don't keep any important information from me, cousin" shortly after meeting Eldrian and leaving him with the crystal. Why is she now a niece?
there was a countdown initiative on the last 72 hours of the competition. they left like 10 minutes left at the end of the challenge just now
he made it to B rank a while back. that's why he can deal with the feys so fast. also the inconsistencies with the fey evolution he shouldn't really be struggling with evilving to bronze legend much after hitting B rank based of thay chapter. all in all a bit of an odd nurf from the author
Definitely feels that way. also inconsistencies in the text. Department head Song just said that people stopp3d at gold when in actuallity. Silver is the limit imposed on earth. Since when does ruin jump his ability from a mid tier bronze rank to gold. He needed myth to do that. Even if you include his atribute increase post exam and training the jump between ranks is exponential.
feels like they don't after having read through for a while