King_Ryuma

Xiao Jiong Yang = Gyoro Gyoro

Podrías pasarle el documento a chat gpt y pedirle que te entregue el documento en ingles, así saldra bastante bien.

Amigo si quieres mas lectores, deberías publicarlo en ingles

Artificial intelligences often write this way, so it's easy to spot which stories are written with chatGPT.

It would be good for Mu to recruit wandering clans, such as the Chinoike clan, the Iburi clan (he needs to find a way to help them with their problem), the Kaguya clan, etc. (Maybe get an Uzumaki to break the seal on the Hyuga clan's Caged Bird, and thus recruit the clan's secondary branch.)

Her name is Roka, Roka Paramia, not Loly

Although the name of the family that looks after the doors also changed from the previous chapter.

Why Kyoraku instead of Tsunayashiro? It's a pretty obvious mistake and it's repeated throughout the chapter.

Thanks for chapter