Vikram_Bij

updating my review at ch 26 love the depth of chapters and the pace, honestly the pace seems perfect to me along with the details, as long as updates are regular I don't mind this at all. I love the personality of the mc, acting like person who is mentally older and childish along the way which is bound to happen as he is living inside a childs body. Really like that mc is going to be a explorer tbh and not planning to be a king. keep it up bro and thanks for the chapter. p.s. don't make it a harem please......

writing this review at ch 41, been following this for a while now. Good things - Really like the concept, its kinda fresh and timeline is great. Nobody is nerfed to make the mc look cool which is good. Mc's power up is kinda realistic and stable which i like, he is not getting too strong too soon. Like the fact other characters are not meaningless and everyone has a personality including mc. Overall one of my fav Naruto fanfic till now. Issues - I have no issues per se, but sometimes the power level of characters are little shaky, but it is to be expected as we don't know how powerful was jiraya and other were in 2nd war. Other than that everything seems great. Advice - please don't make it a harem, don't get into romance too soon, keep it slow paced. Another thing is that mc doesn't need to be strongest soon, he can be fairly powerful which will keep story interesting, no need to make him op even in later stages in my opinion, otherwise story will lose the essence. thank you.

thanks for the chapter🙌, I am good with the pace as long as there are regular updates

hey, updating and giving new review after I read last 20 chapters, I like the pace and story development now, it's steady nor fast nor slow. mostly i like the character development going through of all the characters, and how they are not just fillers and have personality and how mc's character and personality are showing out . good work, will keep reading for now, waiting for more chapters. P.S - please don't make it a harem.

please no harem 🙇

hey author, I really liked the concept, but my main issue is I don't understand the mc's character. I don't mind if story has alot of pov etc but the mc's ambition, goals and his personality is at all not clear. It's very ambiguous right now, and considering its transmigration, mc personality should be much more evolved right, I mean at least give us an pov regarding this. Plus the story is being a little too repatative for me, and no story and plot development but that may be you just setting the groundwork so I am fine with it. But please try to focus a little more on mc and less his personality a little bit.

I really like the premise, it's pretty fresh and I like the depth of every character which is shown. The pace is pretty slow right but that's okay, but I think some pov are too detailed, like every thought of the person, i think you can cut on that a little, otherwise it will take too long for story to progress and sometimes it kinda gets annoying to read all the thoughts. Advice - As a reader, i feel that every fanfic when they get into romance part, they focus too much on it and story revolves around it very unrealistically and this shifts focus from the plot. So please don't start the romance part too early leave it for late like very late until the mc is in late teens or adult. p.s. please don't make it a harem.

I really this fanfic, I will talk about good parts first - mc is fairly powerful but not op, story focuses on other characters too which is good, you haven't weakened other characters like Minato, jiraya and fugaku which I really love. The overall pace is also good. I really look forward to mc character going forward, I hope he doesn't not stay this sullen forever. plus don't make it a harem please and don't make mc too op too soon otherwise the story will lose the seriousness in my opinion, so keep him fairly powerful going forward but not op. thanks really looking forward to read more.

just gonna read this and giving this review because my jersey number is 77 and my fav number is 7.

thank you for replying 🙌, excited for more chapters.