Plain_Grass021

I'm dropping... MHA fanfic without deku is bad... what a waste of time and story... You should add that on the description as a warning so that you don't waste anyone's time...

I dropped this cuz MC chose to be a dragonoid for the race in DxD... would have been fine if he was human... would have been better if MC was human first, and then race change to whatever after several chapters...

Horrible start... unnecessary killing off side (minor) characters... dropping...

So dropped?... Ok.

Misplay on that pot of greed... and was Ash Blossom discarded?... kinda sucks if MC lost with a branded deck..

A rewrite is nice, though it would be nice if the MC was still human and didn't have a Vision (hopefully the MC wouldn't be suddenly be OP and have less/no more enemies)... and for the System part, you could have made the system sacrifice itself at the time the MC ate the dragon's heart (I quit and don't remember much about genshin and its lore)... like, had Celestia/Heavenly Principles detected that as an anomaly/something that upsets the balance of the predestined fate of the world, and the System had to sacrifice itself to delay that or something... but write what you want, Author. Don't mind the plot holes too much... as it is just a fanfic, and it would give you unnecessary stress..