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It's kind of silly, but that makes it entertaining. It kind of jumps from one area to the next, as if the author is in a hurry to get somewhere, but not so much as to take away from the fun.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

1/20th is 5%

I love the story. The words flow and has amazing grammar. The characters have depth, which is better than a lot of the two dimensional characters out there. Rarely do I give 5 stars, but this book deserves it.

tequila does not taste good. haha

I like the story so far. My only issue is that the chapters are super short. Maybe you can try combining them?

thank you for the chapter! I am enjoying the book so far. Keep up the good work :)

lack of personality. you had enough going on, and you had plenty of personality in most of it.. some parts were just bland. I mean don't get me wrong am enjoying the novel, I wouldn't still be reading it if I wasn't haha.

I dont know, some of the earlier chapters were kind of bland. Like it had trouble grabbing and keeping your attention.

thanks for the chapter! it's less dry now than at the beginning. :)

Newborns open their eyes at birth. They just can't see more than shadows

thanks for the chapter! :)

thanks for all the chapters today

so the main character's first companion is a stripper? lol

you can remove the something at the end.

It's a great story. It's original, with some moments to make you laugh. The only issue I have had is it can be kind of dry at times, but it does not take too much away from the story.

It would be cool if he uses a hammer while in combat. I mean he is a blacksmith.

I like it

once not ones