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Morbidwishes

Morbidwishes

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a nerd who liked to read and write

2019-07-09 JoinedUnited States
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes1d
    Commented

    get *

    "To Qiless like us, villages of this level are only accessible when we reach level 5 and can teleport over. In fact, many don't do it even then because of the danger a village of this rank could pose to the Qiless. It's a surprise that a Qiless beginner would gwt Veritas as the Starter Village. There must have been a reason this happened."
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    VRMMORPG: The Other World Online
    Video Games · Anji_King
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes19d
    Posted

    It's kind of silly, but that makes it entertaining. It kind of jumps from one area to the next, as if the author is in a hurry to get somewhere, but not so much as to take away from the fun.

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    I Failed To Be Truck Kun'd And Was Forced Into A VRMMO As A Cat-Girl
    Video Games · invayne
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes3mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 67 Care Part 1
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    Soul Fusion Online
    Video Games · invayne
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    1/20th is 5%

    The amount I was able to send now was way less, maybe one twentieth (2%).
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    My underrated elemental affinity
    Fantasy · BigElf
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Posted

    I love the story. The words flow and has amazing grammar. The characters have depth, which is better than a lot of the two dimensional characters out there. Rarely do I give 5 stars, but this book deserves it.

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    My underrated elemental affinity
    Fantasy · BigElf
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    tequila does not taste good. haha

    [[ A/N: I don't know the taste of that though it's just my imagination. And I am still a minor after all. ]]
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    Ancient Vampire in a Modern World
    Video Games · TheUnknownEntity
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    I like the story so far. My only issue is that the chapters are super short. Maybe you can try combining them?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: New Skill: Instant House!
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    Error In The System
    Video Games · dashiharu
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter! I am enjoying the book so far. Keep up the good work :)

    Ch 24 Dummy
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    My underrated elemental affinity
    Fantasy · BigElf
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    lack of personality. you had enough going on, and you had plenty of personality in most of it.. some parts were just bland. I mean don't get me wrong am enjoying the novel, I wouldn't still be reading it if I wasn't haha.

    Ch 46 '...it actually helps, counting'
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    Bygone Era VR
    Video Games · rezerochance
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Replied to rezerochance

    I dont know, some of the earlier chapters were kind of bland. Like it had trouble grabbing and keeping your attention.

    Ch 46 '...it actually helps, counting'
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    Bygone Era VR
    Video Games · rezerochance
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter! it's less dry now than at the beginning. :)

    Ch 46 '...it actually helps, counting'
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    Bygone Era VR
    Video Games · rezerochance
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    Newborns open their eyes at birth. They just can't see more than shadows

    at three weeks, i started to see clearly, but still i still chose to not let anyone see me while i am looking because that would be weird. newborns wouldn't open their eyes this early as it took them around eight weeks for that to happen. but still five weeks were acceptable and not suspicious.
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    My underrated elemental affinity
    Fantasy · BigElf
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter! :)

    Ch 125 The Battle Inside the Royal Palace
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    Versatile: Alternate World
    Video Games · Kyosei
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    thanks for all the chapters today

    Ch 29 Hobgoblin Horror
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    Bygone Era VR
    Video Games · rezerochance
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    so the main character's first companion is a stripper? lol

    Ch 12 Episode 12: Aarus, Eluna, and the Alliance Kingdoms.
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    Legacy of the Betelgeuse
    Video Games · Iqfauli
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    you can remove the something at the end.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Legacy of the Betelgeuse
    Video Games · Iqfauli
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Posted

    It's a great story. It's original, with some moments to make you laugh. The only issue I have had is it can be kind of dry at times, but it does not take too much away from the story.

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    Bygone Era VR
    Video Games · rezerochance
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    It would be cool if he uses a hammer while in combat. I mean he is a blacksmith.

    Ch 2 02 - Why Not?
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    xxx...xxx
    Video Games · Zhanye
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    I like it

    Ch 1 01 - Legendary
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    xxx...xxx
    Video Games · Zhanye
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  • Morbidwishes
    Morbidwishes4mth
    Commented

    once not ones

    Dan frown when he hear Shin and said "Oh, is that so? What a pity then. And if you are thinking to get some quest on the Village Chief then you are going to waste your time ones again because that Old Man didn't give a quest, all he is doing is to talk for entire two hours and give nothing. So if I were you, I should go outside the village and kill some monster to get some EXP." Then he turn around and walk away having his boys in tow.
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    Child of Destiny
    Video Games · ProudMonkey
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