The second transmigrator ruined it.

Guy reincarnates as a symbiote that literally bonds to and is like a second skin for a person, and his first thought is not bonding with a hot woman like catwoman or Harley Quinn, but a guy. GAAYY!!!

Sea of Thieves would be amazing in VR. Crewing a ship, fighting others ships on the open sea, plus Island hopping for treasures. Asassins creed would also be amazing.

This story would be 1000x better without the Cthulhu stuff. Supernatural already has more than enough types of monsters, demons, and other supernatural beings with comprehensive backgrounds in it, It does not need to add more monsters to move thee story along. This just complicates it, and takes away from the original supernatural world. The writing quality is great though.

I should of read the comments first. I started this fic looking forward to one of my favorite characters from DC in Marvel, but all I got was some half-ass system novel that nerfed Shazam hard. Please don't be like me, Read the comments first.

No, I understand who Avicii is, I've seen him in concert, and I understand wanting to honor his memory in this book. What I don't understand is why the MC is featuring him on songs when he doesn't exist. She could of just named herself Avicii instead.

This whole Avicii thing is confusing.

You made him entirely too sane, and reasonable. Deadpool is supposed to joke incessantly and break the fourth wall. If he is asked a question he should be giving a totally different answer then what's expected.

Yeah the whole Marvel superheroes was a mess. So many different companies had claims, it caused so many problems.

Please tell me he's not one of those stupid heroes who has a no kill rule no matter what. If this is based off Blade I expect him to kill his enemies.

When is he going to start making actual movies, and not these fun, not serious, cheap ones?.

even so, it's still super gross and illegal. Peter Parker is 14 in Civil War.

+1

Awesome title.

There is no President in Canada, we have a Prime Minister.

MC is a complete idiot. He goes to all the trouble of torturing them, then wipes their memories of it so no lesson is learned. Earlier in the story the system told him nothing could harm him or the store, so why is he worried about the nobles?... It makes no sense.

When computers get better it would be cool for him to 'Create' World of Warcraft.

This is so confusing to read. You need to differentiate the talking, thinking, and just info dumps. Use "Quotation Marks" to let readers know when someone is speaking.

If he wants to be taken seriously as a Director/Screen writer, He's going to have to stop making these corny, cheap comedy movie's and actually make a movie of some substance. Fight club, V for vendetta, The departed, something like that.

Maybe now that he has money and connections he can start making big movie's.