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Jasmine4205909510mthCommentednice story , like it lot but the only problem is that the miss placement of the surname and grammar mistakes with he and she.
Ch 51 AdmirationdetailA Stern Mistress from the Ancient Past Becomes the Cannon-Fodder in a Wealthy FamilyGeneral · Chocolate Lover- Jasmine420590951yrCommented
the writting is so immature like two kids are to talking and about the mc, she instantly got used to her reborn as well as also instantly realised which date it is that day . And it hasn't even been a day but already weaving dreams of someone else , when she was supposed to be in love with that guy Dustin . And that guy Evan is being potrait as a spare tire which she only turn back to when she got betrayed by her first choice . Next is that she being potrait as a intelligent person but she still wasn't able to get her priorities straight , like except for love , she should have been clear about other matter like her career and all . write now she seems like gold digger to me for she only went after him because she knew that guy will be successful in the future .
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she is a adult but she forgot that a kid need to eat
She didn't have the heart to leave her little brother alone at home. Now seeing him again made her somewhat afraid. - Jasmine420590951yrCommented
that's a nice twist
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doesn't she remembers that Sophie has crowd problem , haaa
"A tea party? I do not mind, but I do feel bad about leaving Sophie behind. Can she come as well?" I really did not want to leave Sophie alone during this time as she has been kind of clingy and insecure about what was to come. - Jasmine420590951yrCommentedCh 89 Explaining It Clearly