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SO HEY!!! How ca you be so cruel and create a character that just literally appears to die!!! I pity Emma. At least give her a proper reason for her death and why she died. I want to know what is the reason why her whole family is massacred too!!! Please update quicker!!!
I like how I thought that Teivel is the Emperor and he is just pretending to be dead but there really is an emperor different than Teivel. I want to unveil the identity of the emperor. The characters are also good, especially Arnold, I liked hiss reactions when being teased by Teivel. Overall, can you make a proper cover though? It feels like your cover is rushed or something... anyway, I'm rooting for you. I want to read more of this.
Oh, is it the first real fight scene?