Loanedheart

Nice....for a breather.....keep going.....

I agree it was a bit rushed and need polishing.

??, I didn't get you?

Give it a try.....!!! As the story goes on its development will be more realistic just like a real world cut throat competition with profits and plots to outdo one another and stand at the top of the "Entertainment World's Pyramid." The Character Design will also become more mature as the story slowly progresses . READ and leave your comments to IMPROVE THE BOOK TOGETHER. CONSTRUCTIVE SUGGETIONS will be adapted to the chapters if possible so after reading do DROP A COMMENT.

A nice book......I like the way the story progresses....... By the way.....I have just started working on a similar book in the same genre...." Retake: A Life beyond the Lens" do check it out and comment.

The build-up in the chapter was good it keeps me waiting for the next one....nice

I really loved the chapter and looking forward to reading the rest .....

The layout of the chapter is nice... comfortable to read

Got a lot of goosebumps reading.........but the dark tone is perfect for this setting.

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