- The story is good - I think Camelia is my favorite character and why I think so, is that she saw truly, observant, selfless but not foolish... how she would have marry sol father(Mar) but she choose sol, it make me see how observant she is and not careless in her decision...we as the reader we don't see what see sees but thru her interaction with her niece (chloe) let us know that..her trust is not placed on the wrong person.. - sol forefathers they are stupid, the founder of luxuria is really stupid for treating d witch that way..also his grandfather that make his aunt to be like that.... I believe that to make a king or a leader, the person should be able to make his home ( they sacrifices to me is not abt their kingdom or the people abt it but about their power or their face( limelight) ) - The story pace is okay but I think it can still be better.. - I think I would like more character development than fight and smut scene..when I add this story I was looking for erotic scene but then I like this story more than the smut scene in it, I believe if it's not there I will still read it but I know the story can't be the story if all this are not there...to me I will prefer more character development... there's more that we don't know abt, we can only know it throu d characters - I think goal I mean real one for the mc.... apart from having more power to protect his loved ones.. The greatest strength so far to me is love... it's sold strength and weakness and have seen that the strength prevail the weakness...it make him who he is...loving this story... good job author

Author, your novel is good and I want you to know that people are reading it, when I see ur thought I want and u to always be motivated. Some people like me we don't always comment but seeing ur thought I can't help but to that... I believe they don't see ur it , if people read it they will want to read more... always keep motivated.. tnx for the chapters, tnx for writing this novel..