Hey man, I just wanted to know if you still intend to continue this story, from the little I saw of her I thought she was great! I know you must be having trouble in real life (ugh school) so I won't ask for a chapter asap, but I was wondering if you still want to update this story so I can look forward to it. well that's it dude i wish you all the best and hope to see you again. Ps: if some words don't make sense, it's because I used google translate to write this, sorry

I prefer the new writing style, i think the old one pretty confusing

Today...hum

autor can you post this in another site?

use this for one of alice's disappearances

Use this for alice

Use this for alice

Use this for alice

I was wondering...when a cut scene occurs can the mc interfere with it? or it will happen that like last time when the player paused the game, paimon will prevent this from happening. It would be fun if he could interfere in a cut scene. besides the terrifying paimon only appears when a game mechanic appears (pause the game for example) and the paimon that appears in story mode is normal or is she always like that. I was imagining the protagonist dying of fear of paimon when he met with her in a cut scene for example and paimon getting confused as to why he is afraid of her Ps: Sorry for my horrible english i speak another language

Yeah! Jack Frost, i love him

I think Zhongli or yan fei shold be good to justice arcana

The persona awakening is always the best part of persona series for me, and this one don't dissapont me, great work!

harem. I feel it would be ironic and poetic at the same time and with some potential for comedy as the mc hates harems

(I am not a writing professional so I may or may not put the wrong terms when referring to certain things and my English is kind of bad so I used the google translator to write this sorry if the translation is meaningless) wow, when i read your story it doesn't even look like i'm reading a fanfic on the webnovel, your way of writing and narrative rhythm are something that you would normally find on fanfiction net, As much as you are not very detailed or that is describing each little thing that occurs in the story your rhythm ends up being much slower than other stories here where the rhythm of the stories are faster, which is not a bad thing at all, I personally prefer it just like you do because when a chapter ends with a feeling of closure, many stories make short chapters that seem to lead to nothing, or they end up making the chapter be divided into several parts or they arrive at the climax of that very chapter fast without developing anything which ends up giving a feeling that nothing really happened. I really liked your story so far I hope you continue with your good work and good luck Ps: wow I ended up writing an essay without realizing sorry for that Ps 2:sorry I was not able to give any constructive criticism, this writing was nothing more than a great praise :

I am curious to see how this story will develop going forward, continue with your good work! O great author I brought you this meme offering

Is the author Shameless ? He is already entering in the character of a Chinese novel protagonist, What a reliable author(sorry for the poor english i used the google translator to write this, so it must be really bad ;-;)

a legendary mechanic fanfic? This is rare, I was looking for one for a while and I found this one, it shows potential I hope you don't abandon it. I wish you good luck with this story :)