So much forced plot it is kinda ridiculous. 1) First Benson charging off like a teenager. 2) Snow Claws secrets, which he is apparently really good at keeping hidden, are all exposed without rhyme or reason. Come on, try a little harder to make it more natural.

So much forced plot it is kinda ridiculous. 1) First Benson charging off like a teenager. 2) Snow Claws secrets, which he is apparently really good at keeping hidden, are all exposed without rhyme or reason.

Why is this better than an incinerator?

In the land of the blind, the one eyed man is kind.

Let me guess it’s a avatar or Captain Planet type thing where he needs different elements to combine.

So they have advance technology that can create holograms on business card size devices, but there are no track chips?

So, I refuse to let someone work on my body!! Oh I stranger I changed my mind after 10 days and give you full access to work on my body and learn my secrets. Oh confused, well so am I since I apparently have three or four personalities taking turns controlling my actions. Yup sorry I done.

Am I the only one who thinks the author is starting to slip. He has reached the point where he forgets how he explained things earlier, or what the characters did/say. Personalities seem inconsistent. Focus on a lot of different small things that don’t add to the story. Skipping things that feel important. Was really enjoying the book but lately I feel like spending my fast passes elsewhere.

People say this line too much in this story. Someone is yelling this every 10 paragraphs.

So cliche!

What is chase reading? And why does every chapter say this from now on?

So when he lost ‘Alex’ he became and idiot or a sociopath. Actually it started when he was with the garden guard. I am kinda over him, he has no desire to grow. He is being told a way to get stronger and purposefully ignores it. Except for the one evening he broke down, he is pretty flat as a character.

Overall the book isn’t bad so far. And I may stick with it. Somethings are a little weird, like how out of 34 chapter (that I have read so far) 14 are fight scenes that don’t involve the MC. That makes half the story so far not about the MC. Also I am not so sure about the world building. We know next to nothing about the actual world or who the MC is. I do like how the MC is smart and we don’t have a lot of face slapping or pseudo-harems. I am just confused where this is all going. The fact we have to invest fast passes before really knowing anything about the book, MC, world, title, or plot; makes it a bit frustrating.

What is full skin?

Aaaaaarrrrggghhhh! Stop it! Why do you keep doing this?

I can’t do this. The author keeps repeating himself or stating very obvious things. Only two chapters in and the flow is horrible.

And can be haversted as bamboo.

Starting to think author is padding his word count, with the ‘bamboo mountain immortal pavilion’ lol After the first time you don’t have to keep saying the whole name.

So skeletons turn into skeletons. Lol

So he shot through the peep hole of a door? Isn’t it a solid metal door that’s thick enough to block sound? Poor explaination.