It has a good story development and background setting. It just that it has some minor problems with regards to the usage of symbol/sign like (period and coma). In terms of updating stability... please release more chapters.

I hope it's not a sword. It's too common and boring. Give him a unique one or two(twin), will ya. Tho it's already displayed in the artwork. I'm still hoping it will not be a sword or some meta weapon.

CORRECTION "no more THAN 10 people" and "more THAN all"