TailsOfHope

It's clear that there is so much passion in the author's work and I find the writing style is really unique for Webnovel. The guide at the start is interesting and shows how much thought is going into this piece. The characters introduced also feel interesting and unique.

I don't understand how novels like this get so much attention when they are objectively garbage. Yes, I said it: objectively. The quality of prose reads like a 15 year old has picked up their pen for the first time and decided to jot down whatever came to mind. There's no flair, no personality, and no fun to what's being put down. The world building seemed... Okay ? I didn't get far into it due to the abysmal quality of writing, but it seemed they had an idea when creating their story. Overall, this is a HARD pass.

Can't be helped o.o

Thank you for all your support! Your readership is treasured to me :)

Odd but still not showing up :(

Thanks, heh. Did my best!

[Before] is from the time before the MC reincarnated. You can actually go back and read all the [Before] sections and they'll be a separate story that makes sense on their own :) The number next to it is his age.

In this case life 'flashing' refers to the term 'flashing before your eyes' which is a commonly described phenomenon when someone is about to die. The MC is saying that the supposed 'flash' wasn't a flash at all, and actually happened over the course of a couple of weeks, and because life was going so fast he never even noticed it happening.

Perhaps the emotion of Chapter One didn't come across correctly, but in this case, it is 'wonder' as in 'awe' as opposed to 'shock' or 'curiosity'.

Though stories are subjective to enjoyment, I've got a lot of experience writing for businesses so I can certainly give advice on structure, and grammar. Though, one thing you can't get enough of is bouncing ideas. So, we can always help each other by providing a different perspective on something ^.^