Thank you for a caring man story! I am so tired of dads from violance with angry actions toward the mothers. Reading and voting.

Got an old 'thug joke' locally told for this...A man is being yelled at by his wife and after telling her to 'shut up' he says "that's 1" then turns around mad that the dog would not 'shut up' after the loud " that's 3" he shoots the dog...punchline is wife went quiet, usually told to someone before telling them 'that's 1' pointing at them.Breaking furniture, hitting cars and kicking chairs with person in it all usable...This 'anywhere' bonus means being nice, staying inside the lines will not give him new places nor chances to be him (free from gangster boss, bad boy image and humor gone with this chapter).

Did June loose his spine? No respected THUG allows name change like that...writer just turned my stomache. He started as a strong man not a wimpy kid, now he lets them rename. Dishonor to parents.

Wait a minute, there were no missing clothing just broken face written.

Guess the nasty Doctor saw this clip coming to him...

I am so wanting to see the 'acting' bit again get him attention. Now the things "themes" like commercials, movie bits and group singing contracts are opened up. Not sure where the young thug and our hero will meet for a fight but that is also going to be a nice idea for plot. Will it be clothing, food, cosmetics...the field of things he can sell is only limited to his right and wrong ideals. Guess they can mark off drugs, guns and violence as those were his last life junk.

Why couple choices only? I read and feel sorry for pairs. Married and had my 2 kids, can not say couples only way to live. You have to give up "me" ideas for compromising with a "we".Babies are NOT quiet, still things that leave uou peacefully alone.

The style is refreshing. Every piece of armour is possible. That is a Heram dream count. The weapons possible is in hundreds too, so now he must make a smaller choice group. Hoping he gets males too, that would make humor each time the male wants "masters love" too!

This time twist backward is "not" all that great. Dallas the television series brought back the dead, this is killing my reading desire...time rewinding is one thing he could do?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Following and reading as released for lowest member level. So far, female Hero is a real 'blah' addition as not as hero as most stories mother Teresa would slap face at this healers actions.

this is lower than the 10 for level 2 in the last chapter...3 was 20? Cheating low paying system....

Picture aside, there are some cool vampire stories out here most have a heavy handed blood level in the story even at first.

I waited and later the death count hurts when you count them as his friends....

So the word raining, seems the text twice lost the "t"...'training' is what he is doing with the little ones. Spell checker will drop a "t" sometimes the word 'the' becomes 'he' as well.

This should be a lower number like 21...a student died up near Mike when getting his thunder egg, then the girl he got the necklace off of was not in that group either. So 3 would be accounted for but not gathered, if 21 would leave 6 students for main character to save...or 7 if spirit student not in his King class as it said his 'school uniform'.

I like this so far, please remove that negative comment 'review' as that reader was not a true follower of this story type.

Were did all the readers go? Well I am trying my best to give this count...

You have my hopes for this to go into greater levels. I am still reading a finished book that did not complete my female nerd needs, this cooking mom is great base. No info on that "night" makes less a raped feel but you are going to have to let her remember enjoying or doing some in that night. Guess daydreaming of her now is in his future too.

Family at this Covid19 crazy time now is more important than ever. We readers can understand vacation time and family means you may have no control over "destressing" or "tecnology negative areas". I am enjoying this, so thank you for writing it.