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AllisonKayne1

AllisonKayne1

Lv15

Shhh. I Speak Whale 🐋

2019-06-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne11mth
    Commented

    Good book just needs an editor to fix the grammar

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Skilled in Choosing People
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    Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
    General ¡ Like Dawn
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne11mth
    Commented

    someone needs to fix this. I want my coins back

    Ch 41 Chapter 041: Unable to Understand One's Own Actions
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    He Clings to Me Every Night
    Urban ¡ An Lan
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne12mth
    Posted

    This is an absolutely great book in everything but grammar. it needs an editor to correct grammar usage and typos. Other than that, I absolutely love this book and the plot so far. I even spent coins and voting on this book.

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    Remarried For Revenge
    Fantasy ¡ Fallen_meteor
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne14mth
    Commented

    Good Job!!!! Ren, now that's how you woo someone. I'm so jelly

    Ch 1040 JIAO JIAO'S VALENTINE (V)
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    The Return of the God Level Assassin [BL]
    LGBT+ ¡ Tyramisu
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne15mth
    Commented

    well rounded

    Her guess was right. Cheng She had been in charge of everything by Si Fan's side. He was basically an all-rounded assistant. Even if he did not know how to do something, he could immediately learn it.
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    Oh, no! I Became the Sister of the Novel's Tragic Heroine!
    General ¡ Please Give Buff
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne15mth
    Replied to Sheetald

    violin. but translation is hard, so things are often wrong in English

    He could only stand up because of the soothing piano music and struggled to talk to Song Fan. His head was suffering from even more serious pain, so he had to leave quickly.
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    Everyone Wants to Pamper the Bigshot Researcher After Her Rebirth!
    Urban ¡ One Silver Needle
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne16mth
    Commented

    You don't call a motorcycle a car. You call it what it is a motorcycle or the slang is a bike. When you say car you confuse people.

    Then, she patted the back seat boldly and gestured for Gu Yun to get in the car."Let's go, I'll take you for a ride!"
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    The Foster Daughter’s Attraction
    Urban ¡ ACEE
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne16mth
    Posted

    I love it the grammar translation is impeccable

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    My Terrifying Imperial Consort
    ¡ ShaHua x Momo
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne16mth
    Posted

    It's not a bad book, but there are so many problems with the grammar and writing quality

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    Rebirth wife loving husband
    Urban ¡ Munchkin123
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne16mth
    Commented

    You mean Huo Xunzhou

    When a suspicious man appeared beside Lin Shanchu, he, as the top fan who shipped Lu Shiyuan and her, had to observe carefully to find out if the other party was Lu Shiyuan's love rival. 
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    Terminally Ill Female Lead Of An Angst Novel Went Rampant After Her Awakening
    General ¡ Boat Ten Miles Away
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne16mth
    Posted

    I like this book a lot. A quirky novel that is a great read so far. I have only read to ch 50 and I love it

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    The Beloved and Pampered Girl
    Urban ¡ Tingting Guard Guqin
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne17mth
    Commented

    I don't know why people don't go back and correct their mistakes in these novels

    But Mei Mu didn't seem surprised at all. There was not even a trace of emotion on her face.
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    Rich Daughter Reincarnates as Her Eighteen-Year-Old Self to Rescue Her Younger Brothers!
    Urban ¡ Chocolate Lover
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne17mth
    Commented

    it looks like a duplicate passage

    "No, I go to bed early at night, so I won't come to watch," Lu Miao declined. She calculated in her mind that a meteorite would indeed fall in Luo City tonight.
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    Bigshot Gives in to His Wife Again
    Urban ¡ Miyun Buyu
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne18mth
    Commented

    it's a good book but can be confusing. Is he Nian Lie or Nian Ying? You are mixing up your pronuns (he, her, she, he), but not a lot that is really commendable. Other than some grammatical errors and name switches it's a good book

    Ch 283 She is not ning Qing (1:
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    Mr. Nian, Your Wife Refuses To Be The Substitute
    Urban ¡ Miao Che
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne18mth
    Commented

    is it Lu Miao or Lu Qi

    Lu Qi must have touched something she shouldn't have touched inside, which triggered the heavenly lightning.
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    Bigshot Gives in to His Wife Again
    Urban ¡ Miyun Buyu
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne18mth
    Commented

    you repeated this paragraph

    Gu Shiyan reached out and grabbed his collar. He opened the door with his other hand and threw him out of the door. Then, he decisively closed the door and locked it.
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    Bigshot Gives in to His Wife Again
    Urban ¡ Miyun Buyu
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne19mth
    Commented

    be careful you are mixing up your him and her pronouns, which are important in English grammar. This book is really good with very few grammatical errors. I really like it but just want you to be careful in the future

    This was the first time he met Lu Miao this morning. He didn't even say a word to her before that bastard betrayed him.
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    Bigshot Gives in to His Wife Again
    Urban ¡ Miyun Buyu
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne110mth
    Commented

    wow racist much

    "But you told me that you will punish that Chink in my stead!" Erin yelled. "Why don't you beat her already! If it's you who did it, of course, nobody would dare to apprehend you, right? Just tell Mr. Grant that you slapped that bitch because she's been slandering me!"
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    He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
    Urban ¡ ForeverPupa
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne110mth
    Commented

    he saw

    "Erm… We don't have any hard requirements. After all, Xia Wei and Mr. Jian have already won first place. This breakfast belongs to them completely. We have no objections to how they use it," Zhao Ying explained with a smile when she saw the awkward atmosphere.
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    The Female Supporting Character Outshines the Female Lead
    Urban ¡ Fantasy Color Coffee
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  • AllisonKayne1
    AllisonKayne110mth
    Commented

    his gaze

    Jian Tan retracted her gaze without batting an eyelid and looked at Miss Xia Wei, who had just called him her idol a second ago. Now, she was already brazenly reaching out to take the sandwich plate that had not been touched on the table. She turned around and walked towards Su Chu, who was eating an apple gloomily in the sofa area on the first floor.
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    The Female Supporting Character Outshines the Female Lead
    Urban ¡ Fantasy Color Coffee
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