How about No.

I'm enjoying it so far. The writing is very good, and I'm interested in the girl who appears to be the main character. I'm excited to find out exactly who she is and what happened on that night.

Anyways, just going off this glossary, I think this looks pretty thought out. Lots of races and different mechanics in the world. That's something I didn't really plan out too much in the beginning. The resident mechanic also is very unique. It's definitely gamelike. One thing I immediately wonder is 'Will there ever be any residents who are promoted to warriors and take revenge on the warriors for using them.'

*Challenges and suffering are how we improve. (Was what it said, Idk why it got cut off.)

Hello! I saw you on the forums and decided to give your story a look. Given that I've finished a long running fantasy story, I'll do what I can to give advice and stuff, but your story seems much different from mine therefore idk if I can really give much advice here. I do know a lot about character development, so I'll try my best to give you my advice on that. I think that there are always a few stages of a character. Young and naive, dark and grim, and mature. It is only by experiencing hopeless scenarios that we realize that life isn't so easy. At the same time, it is only by recognizing our flaws and trying to deal with these dark scenarios that we grow. Challenges and suffering are how we improve.

Sorry, but I write for fun, and I don't tend to trust things like this. I have an engineering career, and don't feel the need to make money off my novel. Thank you for the opportunity, but I will pass.

Had to do something special for chapter 69

I don't think you'll be disappointed with where the story goes from here, given that you hate this chapter. This story was designed for people who disagree with this chapter.

It seems that our mc here is completely unaware of games and their functions

I would think so, but I don't think this part of his soul is aware of what is going on between him and the other students

I mean being single up to 15 isn't much imo. The only people who have had dates at that age are the ones who are going around willy nilly and doing whatever they want. Live till your 20s without a date that's where you sorta start to realize something is off

Man this teacher is younger than me

Some people just don't like reading a story I guess. I personally am enjoying the prologue. I don't like seeing characters thrown into situations and just getting no background on them. I would rather know who they are as a person, and I think this prologue is doing an interesting job of that.

I quite like how the 'mc' here is just sorta like 'I just wanna go home' rather than being all gung ho about helping people. It makes her more realistic, and it's certainly what I would do. I also like the fact that there isn't exactly a clear right and wrong here, and that both sides are sorta in the wrong. While there is one side that is 'more' in the wrong, neither side is in the right. That further adds to the greyness and makes it more realistic, in my opinion.

Thank you very much! I know it's very dark and demented to an extent so not too many would like it, but I am interested in your story thus far so ill keep reading and let you know my thoughts

I would never skip a prologue/character introduction. After all, this is important stuff. Anyone who skips it is just jumping in without any idea what's going on.

Hello! I wanted to thank you for giving me a power stone every day, so I've decided to read your story as well. So far it seems good, I feel that I'm not far enough in to really say anything worthwhile, but I am left wondering exactly where you will take things from here. I will continue reading to see!

Do not read this person's shameless novel!!! They are a fraud!!! Completely shameless.