I hope everyone just enjoys the story and the characters. I'm not the best at writing, so I could always use some types to fix some things. I'll also take suggestions on how to add more flavor to my work.

Remember to drop a review so more people can find the story.

Hey, posting again. Come take a look at the new chapter.

Forgive spelling errors, I'll catch them eventually. Throwing a comment in will help me catch it sooner.

I just hope everyone enjoys my story. Any advise on my writing or story work is well appreciated and all criticism only helps me get better at writing. Any links to useful information or other novles, leave them in the comments or in a review.

sorry for the long wait, but I am interested in starting back writing. I appreciate you reaching out to me about my work, its definitely reinvigorated me to begin writing again. I will be sending an email as soon as possible, though I am unsure what you need as samples. I have other works here on webnovle and I also have a lengthy doc of one of my ideas I explored passionately about the story you reviewed. My email is ahutchison5webnovel@gmail.com.

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Thanks for catching those for me, appreciate it. Also, if you get the chance I just rewrote ch.1. Go and take a look.

I also have to ask at least ten of my readers to leave a review of my Writing. If I can get at least get ten reviews I show up in the search. Even if its something dumb, could you spend just a small bit of your time leaving me a review. Thank you and new chaptore tomorrow.

Before I do something dumb, is it rude to ask people to read your novel in the comments of someone's else work.

Could someone Comment, I feel like I may have disabled them but I don't know. Could someone just post something to I can see.

https://ifunny.co/user/AustinWriting5?s=cl

If anyone on here has Ifunny go and look up IceColdDrPepper, he gave me some good support. Check out my account as well for updates on chapters, or discussion.

If my action seems kind of stiffled and dosnt flow too well, I would love if someone told me. Its hard to write if you don't have advise.

I personally want to contnioue thus story for as long as possible. Ive learned from past mistakes and will try my hardest to post things regularly. But I also want to discus my novel with any who are reading it.

By the way, I whould appreciate a review. It would help others find the story more appealing with some reviews.

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