SauceofSucess
Just a nerd that likes to read.
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In real life, if someone is having a seizure don't force their mouth open and put something in it. You're more likely to hurt then help
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Haha he's the little three now.
It's from a TV show called Scrubs. It's a classic.
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Should be 'figment' of her imagination. Thanks as always for your story.
Missing the word 'hand'. Thanks for the fun novel.
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You added them at the end. The last three paragraphs should be the first three paragraphs.
It is a gamer term meaning Player Kill.