Brian_fury_3347

spamming susano that is that possible?

The author and the MC both have problems with their brains and morality which is concerning,since nowadays almost every fanfictions has this trope of writing.

Author youbdo know how hard to open a sharingan is right?

Author is the name Mc optional?

Why do authors believe orichimaru can be useful if ur weak,like choosing that syco is A bad idea always and yet they choose it even if there are other far more safer options.

just asking how will he learn FTJ if he hasn't shown any space talent.

he is becoming orochimaru slowly and he will cross the line,he has already started bending his morality line already.

why add another MC this is going to get bad very quick.Change before people start dropping it.

nice the MC is using science to apply in chakra forms which is very good,so many applications.

don't like the old dude attitude i see why tang san cheated him,with attitude and temper there is no way someone would become a friend or anything remotely close.