Xhez's thoughts are definitely seeming to become corrupted. I hope her parents and Rin can help her become more herself again.

Please please please don't let Xhez become corrupted. I understand she wants to find her mother and also help Rin, but it is feeling like she is becoming corrupted each time she reads another person's memories

*come back to this app

This series is one of the only novels I'm reading on webnovel because it is one of the best that continues to get me to come back for me. With the first book's rewrite being phenomenal, I look forward to how this second book proceeds as we get further and further along. I'm very interested to learn how the world became how it is as obvious the world was quiet technologically advanced. [img=update][img=update]

Rin is just accidentally awakening all the gay feels huh?

oh my, Rin definitely sees something important to the Scorned name, unfortunately I do not. I'm going to take a guess and it was either mentioned in her brother's journal, the adventurers' guild or in one of the classes at the academy

Glad Xhez made it okay! and now I'm curious of who that girl is. She definitely knows some tricks to do with guards, so she might be someone who works to avoid detection/suspicion?

Oh no! I hope June is chill about Xhez being a water sprite!

Everything is done wonderfully, and the varying perspectives we see give us insight into how each character is thinking along with how they, themselves interact with the world while also providing potential background into things they do or how they interact with other characters. I am thoroughly enjoying this and am always waiting for a new chapter. Keep up the great work and take breaks when you need to!

I'm hoping everything goes well for Xhez!

here's hoping Sarah and Eric meet safely!

Ooooooh mystery of what her brother did on his adventures! I'm excited to see what gets revealed and if it helps shed a light on the organization/people that teleported Rin away!

I am loving all the other perspectives you are including now, and you have done an amazing job on rewriting this book. I look forward to what all happens to Rin and everyone else as you continue posting!

Oh! I love this version of Elisa figuring it out compared to her finding the necklace in the previous version! This version brought in more characters to lead to Elisa figuring out she bought Rin's services years ago! Amazingly well done qnd more enjoyable to see the thought process of each person!

Oh my. I'm very excited for Rin, but having her teacher tell her off will be such a confidence breaker. Rin has finally starting to build confidence with her training and path in adventuring, and I am so concerned this will destroy everything she is building up.

*unite

Ooooh fun! A potential point for humans and sprites and other species to united to figure out why such a thing is happening? Unlikely unfortunately due to dumb nobility.

Also, oh my goodness the crushes everyone has, feels like all of them should learn about polyamory

OOOOOH! Elisa has discovered Xhez's secret! She should be cool about though since Elisa has hung out with Xhez a few times and also is working on her anti-anything-not-human she was ingrained with.

oh my goddess. Xhez is making friends and learning so much about humans. I'm excited to see how Rin responds to Xhez's night out.