bala_oluwaseun_4686

your pacing is bad and the attributes are to much for these parts in the novel redo it if not will make stats too much to understand

iIenjoy the character building as well as his love triangle

why are u repeating chapter

i like how it going but am sad as there's no update

u have to give him better limitations like after level 20 he has to build up his body and really learn manual forging for his other spirits with system helping in d background, also give him a hammer technique he is ablack smith like soul land manga

thought it would be broken and boring but it ok so far, but better limit should be placed on his powers that will make it more interesting and sensible

I like the movement as well as the restiction on his power on top of his comprehension ability that is so broken but still nice in the way show

make him a magic swordmaster

i like how it going but will he still get the qi girl, hope not

the intro not bad