A unit take for isekai novel, the story was interesting. It's have so much potential, just around chapter 4,5,6 he or she it's a little confusing. Butian? Is he a he or a she.
Any way it's a good read. [img=recommend]
Thank for your advice. I will try to improve it.
For stopping the novel, I'm also feel sorry for it.
The environment was not so good at that time. I'm from Myanmar, and at that time around I can't get my head into it.[img=recommend]
TO be honest, I'm really surprised.
The novel's ideas was a little like my one, don't take me wrong.
I'm just happy to see kindred spirit. Writing quality was good than me. Please try to not so monotonous in fighting sense . Peace.☺️
Hi guys, author here. I want to know some of your opinions as this is my first book. Although I put effort on this work there maybe some problem in my writing style. So if you guys don't mind give me some pointers. [img=recommend]
ZBlue1yrReplied to Yoyuho