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I think a good pokemon fic would be great since i only know of 1 out ther (english) which is decent called Born of Caution. But if i could wish for any kind of fic i would love a SCP based fic as they are quite rare, another concept i love is the 'Summoning' kind where the MC himself is not absolutly broken but can summon units from warcraft/starcraft etc and become a strong lord. These kind of fics are currently rare with the big asian RTS community i hope that you might find some gems that got overlooked. Anyway keep up the great work <3
The story is unique and has just the right pace, in my opinion. I look forward to the future, and I definitely think that the author has a lot of talent and has created a still rough but already shining gem with this fanfic. Also, the sheer amount of words and the consistency are just mind-boggling in my opinion. I mean the amount of words would be enough for 3 chapters in most other novels, so don't get decimated by the as-of-yet low chapter count (53 ch).
I love the story and the way you write it, especially the way you build all the different characters and POVs to make the world more lifelike, which a lot of other authors just ignore, and it makes the stories very bland if only the MC's POV is shown. If I had to criticize anything, it would be the "amount" of training and just side stuff in general, like, for example, the recent Chaps with the breathing technique or the part back when he tried to figure out the whole dye stuff. I get that it builds the world and all, but for the amount that was explained, the result and future use are very limited as it will just be a side note like "he created the runes"; it's just not worth it in my opinion (it's only my personal thought, so yeah). Anyway, you are doing a great job, easily one of the best fanfics I have read so far, and I want to THANK YOU for the consistency and amount you are posting.
Would have loved to see him use the plant/ground stone on a Torterra to mega evolve into some kind of giant torterra like the ones that appeared in detecive pikatchu and for him to build a mobile farm on its back to explore the world with it later on
true his legal name was "Stanley Martin Lieber," but he was a walking W for his creative achievements. That's why I opted to grant him the middle initial "W," rather than using "M."
sorry I forgot to add the picture^^
Abaddon - something along these lines (although less pockets)
Source: Pinterest - Tim Henson (guitarist)
looking something like this
I'm still not sure how I should handle the situation with Peter Parker. Right now, there are three ways I could go about it: 1. I could have him die, 2. he could survive and become a superhero, or 3. he could turn into a villain. The big issue I have with him surviving in any way is that he's supposed to be the reason Gwen becomes a true Spider-Woman while being pursued. But I also think it wouldn't be a good idea to just kill him off easily. So, I'm thinking about making him a villain like the Green Goblin, playing on his crazy side changing his persona every once in a while and play around their past connection. Just to make things clear, Gwen will definitely become Ghost-Spider, but our main character won't become a complete hero. He might be more in between the sides, and sometimes he might even oppose Gwen's Ghost-Spider persona. I hope this clarifies things. In short, I'm unsure, so I might ask people in the future. Peter's possible time of death might be in Chapter 10 or 12, so I still have some time to decide.
Taskmaster
Artist: Toya Platform: Unknown
Duke's appearance (13-14y)