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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow1mth
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    I think a good pokemon fic would be great since i only know of 1 out ther (english) which is decent called Born of Caution. But if i could wish for any kind of fic i would love a SCP based fic as they are quite rare, another concept i love is the 'Summoning' kind where the MC himself is not absolutly broken but can summon units from warcraft/starcraft etc and become a strong lord. These kind of fics are currently rare with the big asian RTS community i hope that you might find some gems that got overlooked. Anyway keep up the great work <3

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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow5mth
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    The story is unique and has just the right pace, in my opinion. I look forward to the future, and I definitely think that the author has a lot of talent and has created a still rough but already shining gem with this fanfic. Also, the sheer amount of words and the consistency are just mind-boggling in my opinion. I mean the amount of words would be enough for 3 chapters in most other novels, so don't get decimated by the as-of-yet low chapter count (53 ch).

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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow5mth
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    I love the story and the way you write it, especially the way you build all the different characters and POVs to make the world more lifelike, which a lot of other authors just ignore, and it makes the stories very bland if only the MC's POV is shown. If I had to criticize anything, it would be the "amount" of training and just side stuff in general, like, for example, the recent Chaps with the breathing technique or the part back when he tried to figure out the whole dye stuff. I get that it builds the world and all, but for the amount that was explained, the result and future use are very limited as it will just be a side note like "he created the runes"; it's just not worth it in my opinion (it's only my personal thought, so yeah). Anyway, you are doing a great job, easily one of the best fanfics I have read so far, and I want to THANK YOU for the consistency and amount you are posting.

    Ch 54 It's not a chapter, but rather a note! (Regarding the story - I'M NOT DROPPING IT!)
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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow5mth
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    no idea what the authors thought process was and what he smoked but anything that was even close to good or decent was thrown into the garbage not even 2min later its just sad.

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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow7mth
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    Would have loved to see him use the plant/ground stone on a Torterra to mega evolve into some kind of giant torterra like the ones that appeared in detecive pikatchu and for him to build a mobile farm on its back to explore the world with it later on

    Ch 64 C064 - Talking about Mega Evolutions with Steven Stone
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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow8mth
    Replied to Onion_CG

    true his legal name was "Stanley Martin Lieber," but he was a walking W for his creative achievements. That's why I opted to grant him the middle initial "W," rather than using "M."

    "Stan W. Lee!" Aunt May's tone turned stern, and her reproachful look made grandpa squirm under the weight of her gaze. "We'll have a serious conversation about putting your nephew in danger with your reckless driving, right after you're done moving all your belongings into the house. But for now, come inside. You both must be tired and thirsty after such a long drive."
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    JackJolWillow8mth
    Replied to Y4RN1

    sorry I forgot to add the picture^^

    The following evening, I donned my Abaddon persona, clad in my signature attire that helped me blend into the shadows. The location was an abandoned warehouse on the outskirts of the city. Taskmaster's information had been accurate so far, and I hoped it would stay that way. As I approached the warehouse, my senses heightened, and I could feel the tension in the air.
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    JackJolWillow8mth
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    Abaddon - something along these lines (although less pockets)

    The following evening, I donned my Abaddon persona, clad in my signature attire that helped me blend into the shadows. The location was an abandoned warehouse on the outskirts of the city. Taskmaster's information had been accurate so far, and I hoped it would stay that way. As I approached the warehouse, my senses heightened, and I could feel the tension in the air.
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    JackJolWillow8mth
    Replied to JackJolWillow

    Source: Pinterest - Tim Henson (guitarist)

    With the door fully open, I was met with the face behind the voice. Seated in a grand, rotatable chair, the boy strummed a sleek, ebony guitar with elegance. His form was a scene borrowed from a cinematic dream, one leg crossed beneath him, the other foot gently tapping in sync with the music. The orchestration of sight and sound blended seamlessly, painting an indelible picture.
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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow8mth
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    looking something like this

    With the door fully open, I was met with the face behind the voice. Seated in a grand, rotatable chair, the boy strummed a sleek, ebony guitar with elegance. His form was a scene borrowed from a cinematic dream, one leg crossed beneath him, the other foot gently tapping in sync with the music. The orchestration of sight and sound blended seamlessly, painting an indelible picture.
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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow8mth
    Replied to ANANTA

    I'm still not sure how I should handle the situation with Peter Parker. Right now, there are three ways I could go about it: 1. I could have him die, 2. he could survive and become a superhero, or 3. he could turn into a villain. The big issue I have with him surviving in any way is that he's supposed to be the reason Gwen becomes a true Spider-Woman while being pursued. But I also think it wouldn't be a good idea to just kill him off easily. So, I'm thinking about making him a villain like the Green Goblin, playing on his crazy side changing his persona every once in a while and play around their past connection. Just to make things clear, Gwen will definitely become Ghost-Spider, but our main character won't become a complete hero. He might be more in between the sides, and sometimes he might even oppose Gwen's Ghost-Spider persona. I hope this clarifies things. In short, I'm unsure, so I might ask people in the future. Peter's possible time of death might be in Chapter 10 or 12, so I still have some time to decide.

    Ch 1 Ch. 5 - Peters doubts
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  • JackJolWillow
    JackJolWillow8mth
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    Taskmaster

    Taskmaster! I thought him being in town was just a rumor, but it seems luck is on my side today.
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    JackJolWillow8mth
    Replied to JackJolWillow

    Artist: Toya Platform: Unknown

    -POV Duke-
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    JackJolWillow8mth
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    Duke's appearance (13-14y)

    -POV Duke-
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