JackJolWillow

Bro with all the love and respect I can show. Ffs get your He/She streight, every second chapter Vs gender changes, I don't care what you are useing to write/translate but come one... 350chapters and this is still happening?

its nice to see that there are still new promising Fanfics appearing on this site. Objectively: its a good fanfic with little to badmouth, the chapters have a nice length and the writing is comprehensive. Story wise, most people have a rough idea about "The Lion King - Disney" so its somewhat easy to follow what is going on. Its also nice that the story is not just a "run along" like most other fanfics that just insert a character in the base story. I would however suggest that the world setting around the humans should be extended since there is no info about humans in the Disney movies. Disney usually works around 2 principles, A: different universe/reality or B: historically similar to earth so you have lots of room especially with the short lifespan of the MC. Subjective: not much else to say beside the fakt that the MC in my opinion is to "dumb" for a reincarnated human, i get that its somewhat explained by the passing of time, but lets be real, how much memory do you lose in 12 years? I get that he is a lion now and is supposed to be mostly focused on his body for hunting etc. but in the situation where his pray is hyper jumpy and scared to the point of running away based on a single sound and him having a bird as help, why wouldnt he tell the bird to drop a stone opposite the herd so they run towards him? anyway keep it up and stay healthy

Didn't think I would like it as much as I do. Some plot holes here and there and the MC was dumbed down a little to much, at least in my personal opinion, but over all its clearly one of the better (new) fanfics

Its sad to see a story that goes down the AI dumbsterfire after 300+ normal chapters. RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP

Dont get why people use AI to increase the word count, also i doubt this fics 100 reviews are legit 🤡stuff everywhere these days AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD AI WRITING IS SAD

The first 50ch are okayish but once the the MC gets a girlfriend it goes downhill fast. Never read a Fanfic with so much filler, out of 10 chapters, 5 are lemon, 3 - 4 are random bs and at best 1 is a little bit of story. Also... the way mc gives 0 fks about the death of his father and instead just starts to fuck 24/7 after he gets told is borderline weird and disturbing.

60 - 70 years later yeah but in WW2? hell no even in 2020+ the average fighter jet speed is around Mach 2 so this bird alone would dominate Air battles on its own. especially if it dosnt die permanently

Good novel and thank god not another one using GPT writing ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................

I get what you mean but giving a book 1 star because you use a external Feature that dosnt work right is not fair (i myself use google assistant tts and dont have this problem)

Overall: good start and the story could have been something good (if you are not that deep into Warhammer lore) but AI WRITING destroys it all for me. First ~10 Chapter. the writing is fine. ~10 - 35 Chapter. Some of the AI writing is seeping through but its still bearable since it fits with the style of WH lingo ~35 - 43 I'm dropping this as of Chapter 43. AI is being used for word count and its blatend, I just read "The Eagle and the Gorgon" and almost had a stroke because the same 6 sentences repeated 7 or 8 times with different wordings. Was a good run we had good reading for all of you who will keep reading.