JackJolWillow

The first 50ch are okayish but once the the MC gets a girlfriend it goes downhill fast. Never read a Fanfic with so much filler, out of 10 chapters, 5 are lemon, 3 - 4 are random bs and at best 1 is a little bit of story. Also... the way mc gives 0 fks about the death of his father and instead just starts to fuck 24/7 after he gets told is borderline weird and disturbing.

60 - 70 years later yeah but in WW2? hell no even in 2020+ the average fighter jet speed is around Mach 2 so this bird alone would dominate Air battles on its own. especially if it dosnt die permanently

Good novel and thank god not another one using GPT writing ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................

I get what you mean but giving a book 1 star because you use a external Feature that dosnt work right is not fair (i myself use google assistant tts and dont have this problem)

Overall: good start and the story could have been something good (if you are not that deep into Warhammer lore) but AI WRITING destroys it all for me. First ~10 Chapter. the writing is fine. ~10 - 35 Chapter. Some of the AI writing is seeping through but its still bearable since it fits with the style of WH lingo ~35 - 43 I'm dropping this as of Chapter 43. AI is being used for word count and its blatend, I just read "The Eagle and the Gorgon" and almost had a stroke because the same 6 sentences repeated 7 or 8 times with different wordings. Was a good run we had good reading for all of you who will keep reading.

I'm leaving my support here because I was almost shocked when the first post (the stolen one) disappeared. It took a lot of effort to find it since the name has changed, but I finally did. Now, onto the review. I've read about 90 chapters so far, and while I won't verify it, I think it should be as good as or even better than the previous post. So, I'll say this: keep up the good work. While I don't think this is the best novel I've ever read, I can confidently say it's quite entertaining. Good luck to you, and just in case you see this, here's a small recommendation: Include the title of the stolen work in the synopsis. This way, there's a better chance that people who enjoy your work and aren't aware of the situation can find your work again.

Yeah no ... this is a muliversal shit fest. 5 chapters and we have -Haki -Strategie game system -Random Daily login system with all kind of dumb rewards -Martial arts -MC body/cultivation uprades And at best a few mentions of pokemon interaktions... whats next? World travel and facedlapping in the upcomming 10 chaps? No thank you. Read at your own risk!

Welp the first 100 chapters are rly solid fun to read and decent pacing. Quality took a dive after moving to Gotham and another huge no go was the switch of writing style from normal to ChatGTP... dunno why the autor did it his writing was good and the chapters where easy to read and comprehend. Droped it after 110 since I rly dislike zhe GTP texts and it always repeats the same sentence in 4 different ways to increase wordcount. Good luck with your next storys

I think a good pokemon fic would be great since i only know of 1 out ther (english) which is decent called Born of Caution. But if i could wish for any kind of fic i would love a SCP based fic as they are quite rare, another concept i love is the 'Summoning' kind where the MC himself is not absolutly broken but can summon units from warcraft/starcraft etc and become a strong lord. These kind of fics are currently rare with the big asian RTS community i hope that you might find some gems that got overlooked. Anyway keep up the great work <3

The story is unique and has just the right pace, in my opinion. I look forward to the future, and I definitely think that the author has a lot of talent and has created a still rough but already shining gem with this fanfic. Also, the sheer amount of words and the consistency are just mind-boggling in my opinion. I mean the amount of words would be enough for 3 chapters in most other novels, so don't get decimated by the as-of-yet low chapter count (53 ch).