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Dawson_Kilcoin

Dawson_Kilcoin

Lv14

I may appear serious at first, but underneath I'm a big goofball who loves to laugh

2019-06-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    *died

    "...Do you think we haven't tried? His physical body was destroyed… his spirit body, too. But that still didn't kill him. No matter what we attempted, that thing simply refused to die. Many of my comrades did in the process, however. In the end, we could only bind him… and even that was only possible with the help of the Saints."
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    *spit

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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    wouldn't mordret be grateful to sunny for freeing him

    "...Let them come."
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    might not need to

    Just how was Sunny supposed to win against someone like that?
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    dozens?

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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    they're piled up

    'That… that is not good…'
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    sat up?

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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    typo?

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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    *retort

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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    I really don't like the use of "by the way", it's unnecessary in my opinion.

    "...By the way, thanks. This would have been much messier without your help."
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    it would be funny if the human they are hunting is mongrel

    "...The most dangerous beast there is. A human."
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    congrats on 500, I'm in love with this story

    Ch 500 ...In the Depths of a Nightmare
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    define "doing well"

    ...She did hope that he was doing well, though, out there in the real world. With Cassie...
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    she wants to be strong

    "Sorry! It's just… my dad works for the government, so he knows such things. You are so young, with no parents, but are able to afford a house in this neighborhood. Plus, you don't go to a university or to work. So… you are an Awakened, aren't you?"
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    *it

    'What… the hell…'
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    I'm enjoying the story so far, but I really hope the author's grammar and punctuality improve

    Ch 34 34. Peace
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    this is the worst way to transition in my opinion. there are better ways

    Back to Walker who now made it to the South Gate
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    an absolute must

    "If you don't mind… count me in, too. I want to challenge the Second Nightmare with the three of you, guys, as well. In fact… even if you do mind, I insist!"
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    nice

    The Incredible Adventures and Astonishing Deeds of Heroic Dreamer Sunless and his Stoic Stone Companions Talking Rock and Silent Saint, Abridged (Volume II)
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  • Dawson_Kilcoin
    Dawson_Kilcoin1yr
    Commented

    awww she worried for him

    "You're back. Way to make your friends worry, asshole…"
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