Hi author San, in recent chapters, I'm seeing lot of repeating sentences, it's like you are lot of paras with same meaning and that it is dragging the story to more words which is not good to read. Please take care of this as I see good potential for your novel.

At last!!!

next update date is added at end.

You know, so far we are only seeing MC pov but it would be really nice to change to some other character pov and also the issue is not wordy but rather the MC character sentences are too cringey and over explaining. So please do change them if you could. Thank you!

I'm done. I can't read this nymore. This is too cringey for me!!. Author if you are seeing this, Please tell me when this cringey chapters ends. This is good story but I won't lie, the cringey and annoying sentences are too much for me to read.

This monologue is becoming increasingly annoying!!!

It has been a great journey author. I wish you all the very best for ur plans on ur next novel or ur future. Thk you for bringing one of my favorite fanfiction live. Thank you!!

Sure Nationalism has yet to start for this one but most if not all CN start their nationalism sh*t from 200 chapter or so and some start it even early. But Will check this one for now.

Author, When are you going to restart your novel "Jack of Arts" ?

Take Care author.

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What an ending and what a story!!! Thank you for this wonderful story and good day to you author @Master4thWall.

I'm good. Thanks for asking and continue ur great work.

Been a while, author. How r u?

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