Daoist011970

First thought: system?!

Lol

Stupid, he would still be considered a core disciple, he wasn’t abandoned, truly a fool

The story is interesting buf certain phrasing is use again and again just making it longer without saying anything with make the story, in the end, quite boring (exemple: [this was the first that *** in this world] [he was hunting, testing,…][this wasnt about strength, it was about…])

More!!!

Awesome read, fast flowing story but not to fast with op mc who doesn’t follow tang san and has a goal other than simply becoming a god or making a harem, this is very refreshing. There is also, as of yet, no force romance just because author liked one of the oc so that is a big + for me. I recommend, it’s a good read 👍

Gold, this is very good, the grammar could be better but the story is so good it can be forgiven