ChaosLordes

Set a small arc goal. Some event or situation that you'd like the mc to face or be involved in. Set what he's got as a current toolbox and see if he can solve it with what he has See if you have enough characters established to make the arc possible. See how your characters and mc need to grow to complete this arc. Set up a bunch of "this would be so cool" points. And start writing with ONLY the arc in mind. If those points fit what you're writing add it. Don't try to force them in. And try it have fun with this. You have a character as capable as Dexter without the psychopathic tendencies. That sounds like a guy who can be a troll and now one can touch him or prove it was him, heck no one would believe it was him [img=proud]

ruin your're marriage? I thought everyone played monopoly to get to the point where one person is broke and needs to pay rent to the other. and like every good roleplay scene some oneasks if theirs any other way to pay their debt

welp this was only gonna go one way and i accept my fate...till i notice some statuesque Amazon and the sheer amount of thought trains yelling "DEATH BY SNU SNU!" Cause me to mentally collapse like my mind was suddenly encumbered by a Giggty amount of Rectangular Building things

i mean he has a fit body, good reflexes, good combat skills. but does he matchup against nightmarish bordering on eldritch battle transfiguration? esoteric charms that emulate mythological phenomenon(gorgon beam, golden fleece, hydra venom and Regen)? okay let's lower the bar for a moment. the imperious curse. but like Walmart version...no idea what I mean? Talion: hi my name is Himothy, this is baby knife. it's gonna do R rated things to your face le randomly competent side villain: oh really, well it would be a shame if say... LIGHTNING SHALL STRIKE YOU THROUGH YOU'RE BLADE... Tallion: huh? whatchu on abou- *Partially fried Tallion* Talion: Stupefy side villain: interesting, good thing...IM MOVING THRICE AS BEFORE... Tallion: Nani?!... not saying you MUST DO AS I SAY. but heck even just using the game of Simon says to riff off the imperious curse as a localized reality manipulation puts Tallion at enough of a disadvantage that your're not on the binary win or lose scale. but on a does he win? (yes, no, yes but..., no but..., yes and ...., no and...) from deep within the Southern Reaches of Africa, Sponsored by Anansi, Ctuthulu and Miaomiao miao...This is your Unsettling Lurking about Chaos Lordes Signing off...Zaijian

take a look at what most anime do. Ichigo: oh wow! i get a huge sword other neat powers. rukia: nope. only a sword. you suck at magic Issei: wow. I'm a devil and i get to use imagination based magic rias:nope to little magic power for that. got study and grow into it. Talion maybe skilled but if the guys he ends up fighting are fittingly skilled or have a wide variety of spells(e.g. Hermione could probably have a spell that makes turning your head to left impossible without shifting the whole body too.

he has returned

may the porcelain throne grant you mercy in these dark times

i just started the chapter and you decide to put the image from scary movie 2 in my head?!

speak for yourself, I personally always thought it was a thread from some forgot 4chan era site. but considering the "quality" of some fanfic I can agree that it suits. as tribute to my fellow brethren look up "the darkness of konoha". heres's your hook: Boruto and Sasuke show up and find Naruto. Boruto: "Dad?!" Naruto: "Die Hyuuga!"