I trusted you Suiyan... well looks like I have no reason to use webnovel anymore. just wish I hadn't just updated my privileges .

it might be interesting if they spend time inside the formation, but if they spent a year in there(outside tome) wouldn't it disqualify them from the guild competition?

You misunderstand, I wish the author had never signed the contract. I dislike webnovel because half the time it doesn't pay the authors in it's china division. I also dislike reading on my phone but priv forces you to.

honestly wished the author used patreon and another site, I'd be willing to do $10/month there where I'm not on this site.

as much as I like two chapters a day, I'd almost rather go back to 1 and have longer chapters. These chapters have so little happening that it feels 1 chapter was chopped into 5 parts. I'm still enjoying the story, but the piecemeal delivery makes it less enjoyable. I think these sections would be more enjoyable if I just waited a few weeks and read them all at once.

it should be the otherway around. a moment for wally should be a long time for the two.

I prefer this quick war thing, if 20 chapters can be considered quick. I wonder if they'll get destiny points for the increased use of combat formations after this.

ah it's not Veronica and Ervas similarities I was complaining about it's similarities of Ervas and Vandalieu that feel less fulfilling to read. Most of the time it's not an issue, but the scene with his spirit floating above his body with many heads felt very similar to scenes from death mage.

I like Ervas, I just prefer him when he's using his own things (telekinesis, plants, and eldritch summons) The scenes where they try to copy abilities from that novel from earth give me a sense of dejavu that doesn't feel as nice.(I guess I just associate the out of body and many heads thing with another character too much) I really liked his fight with the giant goblin that comes later.

yeah, more like it was something new. I still like the story a lot, I just like the abilities that feel more unquix/new than when their using their past life knowledge. Though I guess I just prefer female MCs, idk :(

I kinda wish the story focused more on Veronica, idk the more Ervas gains Van like powers and acts like him the less I enjoy the story. I'd liked it better when Ervas was using his plant/summoning abilities and Veronica her armor/claw/slime abilities they just felt more fulfilling. :/

it doesn't make sense :( she's like 50s, they can't have children till 20, so in 30ish years she had 40(20% of tribe) children. Earlier though you said that they only half their ceremony to have children every 4-6 years. Also she's been trying to have another child with the dad :(

I love how both of them are getting closer to eldritch horrors.

it's funny because his plant army is an elf skill.

Humans can actually eat raw meat just fine as long as it's fresh enough. I'd never do it but I've heard it can be quite good.

I mean they should still be able to use the passage they originally used to get there, since it's a hole in the formation.

Kinda wish it was, if only for Nina. I understand the authors thoughts on the matter and for a real life situation mostly agree.

kinda super useless. considering it's 300 km to the closest city.

:( another bs quest with death as a failure happening. it seems interesting but also means they can't fail without ending the story. course I prefer stories where they don't fail so whatever.

Makes you wonder what happens when two overlap.