I think certain parts need work, like character personalities, but all in all its a solid novel with a great plot.

I'm re-reading the novel a second time to make sure my review is accurate. All I can say is that, this novel is phenomenal. It's beautifully written and even beautifully paced. Continue your hard work author and I'm always here to support.

So far I've liked what I've been reading. I like how the characters you've introduced so far. I absolutely adore Kinya, she's the kind of mc that I love to follow. Keep up the food work.

Here's Kiyoshi

This is a modern Au version of both of them. Kiyoshi's hair is short and Yuki's hair is white

Here's the visual for Yuki and Kiyoshi. I used charat.me genesis and bigbang. This is Yuki

Heres a visual of Naomi and Haru in uniforms. Touchmanga used to create them.

This is an art piece i can use to help visualise Aiko's new look. The art isn't mine, if you're the artist or you know the artist please comment, so I can either take it down or credit you.

More female characters to come but here are the ones that have been mentioned. The males are coming soon.

Morgan

Zabiel

Salina

Yovanna

Luna

Liliana

Aiko