But I do like the abyssal arc.

just use the author's notes to give information that isn't the chapter?

that was the joke but in context he spent 3 hours lecturing her about survival and tactical retreat.

Good stuff, thanks for the chapters. Hope you are feeling better.

Great ending to the battle.

she has hiking boots, its implied that she hikes. Solar charger is a must for hikers lol.

come back to suddenly being the highest level when I was lvl 4 before of 6 total. Crazy, anyways thanks for the chapter lol.

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uhh, in english?

Delve?

The menory mechanic and rng factor of them reminds me of beast souls in super gene. Just not as trash.

Nice. ajhshsdhdhddhdhdddhhddjddjjdjjdjdjj

Why do you add authors notes instead of doing creator thoughts?

looks like everyone dropped it by this point. Just decided to peek ahead and I'm seeing short chapters and not much development. Rip.

Mmm, meat paste.

is xinxia perhaps the female Salan we learned about last chapter?

Trash.

Likely not going to be picked.

There is also some real issues with flow and pacing. Sometimes the story reads like its just notes you jotted down and not a real scene. Other times decisions are made in a split second with no hesitation or consideration to the possible outcome of said choice. There is, for lack of a better term off the top of my head, little REALISM to your characters sometimes. Making believeably flawed characters with their own distinct personalities is an integral part of making your story enjoyable. I think your story could really benefit from a good editor, although, I don't know if webnovel offers this to you for free. Just some thoughts, don't take it too seriously. :)