MaledicrusAeternum

Good day to all. I have been reading this book almost from the very beginning and I have something to say. I will say right away that English is not my native language, I partially use a translator. Do not judge strictly. So, let's begin. This story is one of the best about Harry Potter's childhood that I have ever read. The author perfectly conveys the changes in the protagonist's behavior, his values, moral compass and other little things. The hero grows up, makes moral mistakes, thinks about them, and then changes. The systematic is very well built in, does not draw attention to itself, but perfectly complements, making the work more complete, more interesting. There are questions about the strength of the protagonist, or rather very great strength, but this does not frighten, but entices. I hope the author will not cut abilities, invent crutches and so on, in order to underestimate his abilities. If you started writing in this style - keep writing, you are doing great. That's probably all. I am waiting for the soonest continuation, and to you, readers, enjoy reading this epic.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.

Not bad, very good. The idea is new and has great potential. In the beginning (in the first version of the fanfic), the development was too fast. I did not like. Unreasonable and harsh. Now a more all-embracing plot. I'm waiting for the continuation.