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Obese_Pigeon

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Have you ever seen a pigeon? what about an obese one?? well your lucky because you could befriend with the cheap cost of $0 :) i need friends....

2019-06-09 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to DreamThree

    mass release?[img=update]

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    did a lil fan art, its kinda bad tho but whatever[img=recommend], love your work guiltythree, gratz oj top #8, hope you can get top 5 in a the future

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to Ragequit1

    You can always look it up on *cough* i mean AHHH what a shamee

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to Obese_Pigeon

    ohh ok thx

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    uh... does the author dont give an extra chapter for every 100 gt? because there dont seem to be extra chapters for every 100gt, he updates 2 chapters per day

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    called it

    Ch 90 Chapter 090. Performance
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to manny0101

    valid point, but if ma boi brings a gun then the story ends and thats a no no

    Ch 89 Chapter 089. The Fan
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    Bro, that weirdo is so gonna f up he concert, i can feel it, simps usually stab the people they like that guya gonna stab emily😱

    Ch 89 Chapter 089. The Fan
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    if you buy three

    "I'm selling a graphic novel about superheroes for 15 dollars. You will get Pikamon Moon for free if you three."
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    Really like how the story is taking and how the author potrays and write the characters. feels realistic i like it although its slow, i dont mind

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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to Obese_Pigeon

    why the fuck did i give it 2.5 starts welp it is what it is i was so mad i made typos lmao

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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    what the f did i just read... ok listen here guys these story highlights a mentaly deprived idiotic lucky mc who cant seem to put his points straight whilst having a thing for taking unnecesary risks as he looks out for ways to duck himself over but still somehow succeding. the decisions the mc makes in this novel IS LIKELY TO CAUSE BRAIN DAMAGE SO BE CAREFUL. like imagine paying someone not known with no fame and ussually only plays extras, 15 MILION dollars, YES 15 MILION DOLLARS to play in a movie with 90 mil budget just because he was popular in mcs past life... LIKE WHY????? mc legit paid 15k dollar for his lead in hsi first movie.... and the guy he pain 15 mil for somehow just had good acting skills.... LIKE WHATTTTTT. +++ fl falls for mc in first sight +++ shit side characters +++ shit inconsistent personality +++ shit explanations +++ unlogical characters its just bad... read the authors other works instead pls thanks!

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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    decent, it has good grammar and a very descriptive style of writing but somehow it just feels monotone to me, i read like 15 chapters and so far theres nothing that piques my interest,make my blood pump or make me giggle. i recomend the author to try and think about the way hes writing and potrayng his story right now as even from the first 15 chapters the actions the mc do and what hes saying feels somehow odd since whats hes thinking isnt what hes doing creating a somewhat inconsistent character, ontop of that although i respect the effort having a descriptive writing style doesnt meanto repeat certain things in different ways like for example its better to just make the main character Do the action than writing about the ideas of the main character and then explaining him doing it right after. I mean cant blame the author since the setting in general puts mc in a very uh how do i describe it... advatageus enviroment? the readers cant feel the chaos nor the panic/fear that is, whats gonna happen to the main characterr since he could just well... turn back timeee. welp sry for writing this but i do see a lot of potential in this novel as from a creative point of view its a 5/5 i personally enjoyed the world building. And oh writing the main character as being lost kinda annoys me as hes supposed to be a top tier agent. welp thats all

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    The Wild Hunt System
    Fantasy · IndianSage
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Posted

    Ok im gonna be real this novel is atmost decent, but because of the simple writing style and satisfaction you get through mc's growth, its very enioyable to read. The system he gets although preety op, isnt to the point of bsness, i like the characters and although some instances feels a bit forced to create realism, its still great. Unlike the authors previous work, the holliwood thing, this novel is atleas 100000000000x better. Author seem to have learned a lot and managed to create a genuinely good novel, it may get worse in the future but as of know that it like 80 something chapters, its been preety good[img=recommend]

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to Obese_Pigeon

    something something shard : uses? probs buff something like sunnys blood thing maybe buff memories?? looks: its a crown.. its cool nice

    Ch 254 The First Lord
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Replied to Panda_Rabbi

    no, because its one of the memories you can get from the statues right? through killing the monsters that guard the 7 statues. Its probs the one from the spider queen thing they found or the monster guarding the walking statue they uaed to get there

    Ch 254 The First Lord
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    well that was, uh... what did i want to say again? oh yeah, a sticky situation

    Ch 203 Corpse Eater
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    Well atleast there wont be any scary music playing since skeletons dont have organs, be grateful sunny[img=recommend]

    Ch 194 Aching Bones
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented

    sunny, your pain will lead to our happiness pls hold on for us🥰

    Ch 181 Rules of Hospitality
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Obese_Pigeon
    Obese_Pigeon1yr
    Commented
    Ch 155 First Recruits
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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